| "Harsh Changes" Reviews/Comments [ 28 ] |
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Reviewed By: WinterWolf7 On: November 21, 2003 01:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great
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Reviewed By: Relix On: November 19, 2003 18:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a very original fic, i mean really awesome, so sad and so happy.. i hope there is a sequel!
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Reviewed By: Animegurl002 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2003 17:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wish I could give you and 11 for this story. I'd been searching for it to re-read again. I remember when it was on fanfiction.net, and suddenly, it was gone. Oh yeah, I just read the other two stories, and I enjoyed those too. Well, that's all, and I hope Gentle Changes comes out soon.
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Reviewed By: lil'sesshi On: October 15, 2003 15:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so gooooodddddddd you have got to write more like a sequence or something....::giggles uncontrolably::
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Reviewed By: Ymanetta [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2003 06:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was a joy to read. After you complete one chapter you could not wait to read the next. You have the works of becoming a great writer. Please continue to do what you do best.
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Reviewed By: lord kina inuyashas sister On: September 21, 2003 16:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey could u write more like what happens when kiya gets older and what about kagomas family there is a lot more you can write plz do so
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Reviewed By: Kilala36 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2003 20:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
(sobbing)That (sniffles) was (sniffles) b b beautiful(crying).Sorry(sniffles) you should write a epilouge but the story is great just as it as. |
Reviewed By: bsasami153 On: August 05, 2003 19:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Enjoyed reading your fic. It needs a continuation because in a way it didn't solve several issues with Kagome's problem, his problem, and Sango's problem. Mostly his problem here. |
Reviewed By: Felicity On: August 05, 2003 06:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm.. Kagome is a lot more forgiving than I am. So she's like gonna live with the man who at any moment could beat and rape her again. Actually I would have enjoyed this fiction a lot better if Inuyasha I dunno maybe promised not to fight anymore. or maybe was a little sorry he brutalized the woman he supposedly loves. Cuz the way I'm reading this he feels more inconveniced than anything else. |
Reviewed By: MommyRogers [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2003 20:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Intense . . . well written too, though you need to proof read after spellchecking. Awesome work! |
Reviewed By: Babsie On: August 04, 2003 14:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was one of the most original and interesting fanfiction that I ever read.
Very good!
I would love to see a continuation.
What about Kagomeīs family?
What about Kikyo?
What about the relationship between Kagome and Inuyasha?? Itīs everything ok?
Please, donīt leave us without an answer.
Congratulations!!! |
Reviewed By: Tom On: August 04, 2003 10:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Needs A Sequel. |
Reviewed By: Runishie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2003 13:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was wonderful it took me a week to finish but It was really worth spending my free time reading. I think it was well thought about it written in a good form. I also think that your story was unlike any I have ever read.
GREAT JOB!!!!!! ^_- |
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