| "Remembering You" Reviews/Comments [ 100 ] |
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Reviewed By: LeonRinko On: September 18, 2003 23:23 CDT
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Okay, understand that Kagome doesn't remember InuYasha because her memories of the time she spent in the past were erased when she returned to the future for the final time. But WHY did she COMPLETELY forget about her 'Touken-Oniiisan'?! She practically grew up with him in her life until InuYasha 'left' when she was 14, so she should at least remember who 'Touken-kun' is even though she can't remember who InuYasha was to her. |
Reviewed By: Ryguy5387 On: September 18, 2003 22:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The rating system only goes up to ten? Oh well... This has to be the absolute GREATEST fanfic I've ever read... I can't wait for it to be updated again! |
Reviewed By: Maribel On: September 18, 2003 10:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep on going don't stop!! make sure kagome remembers inuyasha!!! |
Reviewed By: Naishin no Miko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2003 12:01 CDT
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Well, now I am hungry for ramen. Mmm, pork ramen. Ano...gomen ne. I am pregnant, and these cravings come so quickly! ^^;
A sweet chapter! Ha! Houjou is gay? Now that is amusing! I was in tears at the ending. Poor Inuyasha-sama. His spirit must be strong, indeed, because I know that if I were in the same situation--waiting 500 years to see my love and then to hide those feelings inside once again--I would die from the suffering.
Again, a sweet chapter! I understand your school situation, so I will wait patiently for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Aditu On: September 09, 2003 08:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I really didn't think that there would be an update already, not that I'm complaining, quite the opposite! Loved it of course, though I feel so sorry for InuYasha, poor guy, wanting Kagome to remember him so badly and all. Makes me want to reach in the monitor and shake her "IT'S HIM!", lol. Can't wait to read what you have in store for what has happened to her over the past few years and such, even if it is sad. Anyway thank you for the new chapter and will check on my usual daily basis for the next one. Really enjoyed it. Best wishes! |
Reviewed By: katie9821 On: September 09, 2003 02:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy reading your story. I think it's classic bringing in the whole Inuyasha gang into Kagome's time. I hope Kagome will begin to remember her time in Sengoku Jidai. |
Reviewed By: Ta-ti On: September 08, 2003 14:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*LOVE* your fic and u BETTER finish it......or else....^_^ sike nah but i really would like to see this thru.... ~adios~ |
Reviewed By: Aditu On: September 08, 2003 08:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so happy to see you updated! Thank you, I was starting to get worried, :). Hope that we won't have to wait too long for the next chapter *sigh* I will still be checking every day though, lol.
You did a wonderful job of evolving the characters personalities over the 500 years,how they integrated into society and...well this whole story is excellent. You make it so easy to picture things as they happen and that's what I look for the most. I got a kick out of the 'conversation' with Kikyou ;).I guess what I want to say is that I really enjoy reading this fic. Thank you for sharing it! On a side note,I don't envy you having to come up with last names, that must have been tough as you stated in your note at the end. But you did a good job. Keep up the good work and best wishes! |
Title: Naishin no Miko
Reviewed By: Naishin no Miko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2003 23:32 CDT
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Amazing! I am impressed to actually read an ending to the Inuyasha series that makes perfect sense to me! I have to finish the third chapter because my husband is kicking me from the computer, but this is definitely a fun story to read. I am also pleased to see Midoriko remembered because almost no one remembers her involvement in this story, and you included Shinto legend! Arigatou gozaimasu! I know it's asking too much, but I'd love to see Aizen-Myoo make an appearance in the story. However, I will be happy if you just continue this story! |
Reviewed By: yuki On: August 04, 2003 03:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fanfic can't wait until the next chapter is up |
Reviewed By: yuki On: August 04, 2003 03:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fanfic can't wait until the next chapter is up |
Reviewed By: Aditu On: August 02, 2003 14:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue, I am really enjoying this fic, with it not just being a typical Inuyasha waiting to see Kagome in 500 years scenario I like that you have thrown in something that I haven't seen yet with a twist. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading future chapters from you. Best wishes to you. |
Reviewed By: Llorona [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 21:08 CDT
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I like the way you've continued things. I can't wait to see whether or not Kagome's soul chooses to remember! And arigatou for continuing, if only just for me! ;) |
Reviewed By: Geshron Tyler On: August 01, 2003 07:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The first chapter was pretty good, although the
discription of the final battle with Naraku could have used a bit more dramatization. I feel that
you ought to expand the plot to include some kind of
quest, or task, that Inu Yasha and the others must
undertake in order to be able to cross the span of
years and be able to join Kagome in her time. Simply having Midoriko causually tell them that Amaterasu has already slowed down there aging, detracts from the fantasy setting that Inuyasha has.
You could switch between Kagome, and how she picks up her life (as well as what effects the adventures she now longer remembers had on her life), and the adventures Inuyasha, Miroku, Sango, and Shippou go through, in trying to find a way to
survive to Kagome's time. Amaterasu could still extend their lives, but normally Gods aren't overly generous, and make supplicants work for any boon they request.
I look forward to seeing what comes next.
Thiemo Günther
thiemo.guenther@t-online.de |
Reviewed By: tlove On: August 01, 2003 02:11 CDT
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I have really enjoyed this story so far! I cannot wait until the next chapter. Hope to see it up soon. |
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