| "Remembering You" Reviews/Comments [ 100 ] |
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Reviewed By: Aditu On: August 02, 2003 14:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue, I am really enjoying this fic, with it not just being a typical Inuyasha waiting to see Kagome in 500 years scenario I like that you have thrown in something that I haven't seen yet with a twist. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading future chapters from you. Best wishes to you. |
Reviewed By: Llorona [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 21:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like the way you've continued things. I can't wait to see whether or not Kagome's soul chooses to remember! And arigatou for continuing, if only just for me! ;) |
Reviewed By: Geshron Tyler On: August 01, 2003 07:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The first chapter was pretty good, although the
discription of the final battle with Naraku could have used a bit more dramatization. I feel that
you ought to expand the plot to include some kind of
quest, or task, that Inu Yasha and the others must
undertake in order to be able to cross the span of
years and be able to join Kagome in her time. Simply having Midoriko causually tell them that Amaterasu has already slowed down there aging, detracts from the fantasy setting that Inuyasha has.
You could switch between Kagome, and how she picks up her life (as well as what effects the adventures she now longer remembers had on her life), and the adventures Inuyasha, Miroku, Sango, and Shippou go through, in trying to find a way to
survive to Kagome's time. Amaterasu could still extend their lives, but normally Gods aren't overly generous, and make supplicants work for any boon they request.
I look forward to seeing what comes next.
Thiemo Günther
thiemo.guenther@t-online.de |
Reviewed By: tlove On: August 01, 2003 02:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
I have really enjoyed this story so far! I cannot wait until the next chapter. Hope to see it up soon. |
Reviewed By: Llorona [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 23:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please keep writing - your fic is great so far! I can't wait to read what's going to happen next... :) |
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