| "In a different world" Reviews/Comments [ 44 ] |
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Reviewed By: lysel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 20:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story is one of the best PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
Reviewed By: mistykid [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2003 13:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hay i love your story i can't wait for the next chapter! i hopoe theres going to be a lemon soon!
~mistykid |
Reviewed By: anime_angel123 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2003 13:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE this fic! I've always wanted a fic where Sess and Kagome hook up, and it seems that that is what this whole story is leadin' to! I LOVE it sooooo much, you HAVE to update soon! |
Reviewed By: AJ On: July 23, 2003 19:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! THis story is sooo good. I can't wait to read the rest. Update soon. |
Reviewed By: Silver Trix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 18:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
Cool cool cool... Can't wait for the next chapter to come out. Though I think there was quite a bit of a jump in Sesshoumaru's character in this chapter... May be I wasn't reading correctly. ... |
Reviewed By: bise b On: July 23, 2003 18:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so great! haha! that was too funny, inuyasha kicked the door open haha and saw them and then the victorias secret thing was so great. and to put them in rooms w. the same bathroom. pure genius! i LOVE it! |
Reviewed By: Eqlipse_Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 18:16 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nooooooooooo!!! More!!!
Update soon!!!
There as to be more!! |
Reviewed By: mandi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 04:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very interesting. Even though they are a bit ooc, I don't think that has a major effect on the whole plot. Keep writing, can't wait for more. The only critiscism I have is that when they talk it seems to come out in a rush of words, like nonstop, esp. when their father was telling Kagome about her destiny.
~mandi |
Reviewed By: SUNSTAR On: July 22, 2003 23:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY THIS STORY IS GREAT OH MY SO KAGOME IS THAT POWERFUL..WILL THERE BE A LEMON I HOPE SO. KAG/SESS. THIS STORY IS TOTALLY ORIGINAL. |
Reviewed By: Dopey On: July 22, 2003 14:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story PLease update soon!! :) |
Reviewed By: kahn On: July 22, 2003 05:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Cool story please update soon |
Reviewed By: AnimaPrincess On: July 22, 2003 03:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love love love love this story, please continue it and update very very very very soon.^_^ |
Reviewed By: filialunae618 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 21:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
w/ that end of the chapter ur trying 2 kill us?! y would u try 2 kill the only ppl reading ur story?!?!?! lol jk great story so far |
Reviewed By: heikinokuni On: August 22, 2003 17:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the way you were able to change the personality of the characters from their original being to your own. The credability is good, and i like the pairing im just not sure i like kagome with sesshumaro ( kinda want him for myself! ^-^) but good job with everything. Please try to actually get them together soon; it gets kind've frustating after a while cause in every shojo comic the characters take all of the series to get together and when they finally do the series ends and the entire happy ending scene has been seen a lot. I hope to see more of your work soon! GREAT job! |
Reviewed By: ladyfluffy2003 On: July 27, 2003 10:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
shame on you for leaving it that way. Put i love it keep up dating PPPPPPPPPllllllllleeeeeeeeeaaaaaaasssssssssseeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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