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| "Sips of Blood" Reviews/Comments [ 82 ] | | Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 › » ] | Reviewed By: BrokenShards [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2003 20:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
very nice! I can't wait for the next chapter!
continue and update very soon! | Reviewed By: malik&mariks girl On: August 22, 2003 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow you sure are a great writter keep it up you are really good and 4 RA's sake Malik's Girl SHUT THE HELL UP! no one care about you you are a mortal you have issues so that is why i am going to use your flames to burn you with you are very annoying and a bitch malik&marik arent yours they are every1s but YOURS ok i hate you and you hate me Malik's Girl why cant you just leave good writers alone just because you suck at writing Malik's Girl doesnt mean you can flame the good writer 4 no reason!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOW DIE Malik's Girl oh and keep up the story you rock! | Reviewed By: Lady Sephiroth [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2003 13:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. But then again, I'm a hentai freak, so this is right up my alley. ^_^ And as for Malik and Marik's Only Deranged Bitch, or whatever she calls herself, you need a fucking life. It's just a fan fic-calm the fuck down. You're gonna make enemies really quick around here, most of which you don't want. Anyway, Ryoko, I'll be looking forward to more-it's excellent. I'm watching this very closely. *gives Ryoko a Malik and Yami Malik plushie* Keep up the good work. Now if you'll excuse me...*drags Seto off to do her bidding*
~Lady Goddess Sephiroth~ | Reviewed By: Cherreh [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2003 15:29 CDT
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My poor little Yugi. It's good story though. I'm not even going to get started wioll Malik's Girl causeif I do I won't be able to stop. Sooo, Update soon! A quick question though, Where is Yami?
~~~Cherry~~~ | Reviewed By: Silent Sniper On: August 13, 2003 12:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha, guess who? Well, my name is up there...Anyways, I came here and read the fic all over again. ^^;; Update soon.
P.S: Malik and Marik's only girl is weird...I thought Licette and I were obsessed with anime and stuff. She proved me wrong. How sad. *raises eyebrow* Do you know that they are anime characters? Inside of a TV? Not real? | Reviewed By: lusciousdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2003 18:41 CDT
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Hear that Malik's girl, I think you are the scum of the earth, ordering people around, telling them that they are wrong...about their own stories...I don't think so... How could you do this to other people, welll I think you are awful, and over obsessive. Sure "Of COURSE" you're a goddess, and being related to Anubis, the Jackal god, I'm sure you're not good-looking, I mean COME ON, do you really expect us to believe you own the millenium Rod, well if you own it, you must not be able to use it, 'cause I don't see you taking over the world... You should be locked up, are you seeing a pychiatrist, 'cause I really recommend you see one. It'd do you worlds of good, and as for your love of blood, well that's just plain creepy... I hope you get the message that no one likes you, and just LEAVE!!!!!!! That's all, but I just want to say, that I LIKE this story, and I don't care what you say, and neither should anyone else... | Reviewed By: lusciousdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2003 18:29 CDT
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Oh, I see Marik's girl got you too. That sux. Yep, she tore my one story, which has Ryou/Marik pairing to shreds, it was really horrible, but she was the only one, and don't mind what she said, I think your story is good, who cares what she thinks, she's overprotective of Malik and Marik, somehow she got the idea that she owns them. So now she goes around and flips out whenever someone has Marik or Malik in their stories, she was like, "blah blah blah, Marik ain't gay...' well I didn't pay attention, anyway, pay her, and her yami no mind...they're all talk... and her yami is WEAK!!! | Reviewed By: Shadow of Light [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2003 12:45 CDT
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Okay, at first i wasn't crazy about this fic but plz let me explain! I'm very open minded but I guess the first chapter jsut threw me off. now I have read everything and this will be my first time reviewing.
I think it's good and... original ^^ It's funny, I read your commetns saying if you don't like it don't read, but ehre I am reading and now I do like it!
I hope to read hte next chapter soon and this latest chapter, it was sweet. But what about Yami and the good ryou? Are tehy gonna make an apperance or no? Just wondering ^^
Sorry for my bad spelling/grammar, I'm not very good at typing. More plz and soon! *waves* | Reviewed By: LonelyFox On: August 21, 2003 17:40 CDT
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Actually, I came here first, but found your fic on AFF. The &A was soooo cute! And Malik's Girl, you are sad and really need a life. I understand being rediculiously in love with an anime character(Kurama from YYH is my one true love), but I actually understand the fact that he doesn't exist, though it is very sad. And I don't scream at other fangirls. Most people don't. Calm down. | Reviewed By: The God of Death (TGD-san) On: August 04, 2003 00:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mega sized hentai Grin. Mmmm Good. I enjoyed every minute of this little fic. I hope you update soon.
Now on with the roasting of Malik's Girl
first of all MAN ARE YOU A FUCKIN' BITCH!!! I mean for real get a fuckin life. I mean how PATHETIC are you to sit here and flame a fic over and over again, when your the DUMBSHIT that keeps coming back to read it!! if you don't like it go the hell away from here.
but I'll be kind and give you some advice. GET YOUR FINGERS OUT OF YOUR PUSSY AND GET A FUCKING LIFE!!!!!!
And what's with this bullshit about being immortal. you know I bet if I were to put an
AK-47 to your fore head that you'd be begging for your life If I demanded it. but I don't do that, I don't mess with lifless fucks, they're not worth the time and effort. the only reason I'm ranting now is because you have fucking pissed me off.
and also this shit about staring death in the eye. WHO GIVES A FLYING FUCK!!! *raises hand* ooh oh I DON'T and I'm sure no one els does either.
But since you persist about it how about this ever met someone who was a manic depresant who is constantly titering on the edge of life and death to live through the pain or to end it all in sweet release, who doesn't like to be in a room with sharp objects because they're afraid of what they my do to themseleves with them who's friends are the only thing keeping them slightly tilted to the living side of that ever titering edge. especialy what he (guy who is practally my brother) would think. well guess what you just fucking did. but I don't go on and on about how I have near deaths (as in multiple) experiences.
oh you think your better than everybody well I think that your no better than the ground I piss on.
Besides I don't even think Malik of Marik would wnat anything to do with you overly obsessed ass.much less want to fuck your nasty, pathetic existance. it's an insult to the boys to think that they fuck you, no that the thought would cross their minds, no wait again that the subconscience thought would come. which it wouldn't.
But now that I have wasted enough time on your worthless good for nothing lifless ass, I shall take my leave of you. and I leave you with one wish:
FUCK OFF AND DIE!!!!
the world would be a happier place if you would.
See ya
The extremely pissed off GOD of Death
PS: Ryoko-chan alwasy keep this in mind
her flames are fuel for the fire. and as the song goes
fuel is pumpin engines
let it burn hard
loose and clean... | Reviewed By: ACIDFLOWER [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2003 00:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yugi as a sex slave I love it
Glad you go this fic back up
Update soon | Reviewed By: Millennium Angel On: August 02, 2003 20:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fan fic!
It's really cool!
Just one thing.....
WHERE'S YAMI???
I absoulutly adore him, you just can't leave him outtta this! | Reviewed By: Malik's Girl On: August 02, 2003 14:06 CDT
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Oh, I forgot. Tell me his his blood type.
P.S. I have the same birthdate INCLUDING YEAR, blood type, Astrological sign, obbsession with taking over the world, blood(which would also be Yami Bakura), killing people especally the pharoah; women; children; weaklings; and anyone who gets in my way, hair color, height, eye color, tan, sexxiness, jewelry, additude, death of a father, an older sister, a phyco second personality, slaves, servants, egyptain beleifs, Ability to read and write hyroglyphs and hyrogliphics, and just about anything else you can think of. I even have ALL THREE GOD CARDS, AND THE MILLENNIUM ROD! My friend won this Dueling tournament, and the prize was the Millennium Items, and he gave me the Millennium Rod. I was going to enter, because I have every card and have not been defeated, but I had other business to attend to. Like killing people for instance. | Reviewed By: Malik's Girl On: August 02, 2003 13:32 CDT
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If you know Marik's birthday tell it to me. Also tell me his Astrological sign, age, year he was born, friends, And everything else you know. I see you haven't taken up my offer yet. Take it up soon, or else I won't be able to offer it again. | Reviewed By: Malik's AND Marik's ONLY Girl Girl On: July 28, 2003 23:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I still say that you're a disgusting mortal who has never looked death in the eye, that you are not a goddess, that MALIK AND MARIK ARE MINE AND NOT YOURS, that you deserve to die by my hand, that you know nothing about Malik or Marik, and that I will send you too hell. But for your sake I'll be nice to you this ONCE! First off, the girl in the second chapter with the ruby in her navel and the gold chains on her nipples and pubic lips, who is that? Is it Tea or Mai? Secondly, it doesn't seem like there are any Millennium items or Yamis in this story and personally, I like that. Make the Yamis seperate people, but don't make them know their Hikaris. I may not be able too stand Marik being gay, but hey then again it's not my story. Oh by the way, from now on, It'll probably be flames from me until you realize that I am right and you are wrong ON ALL THE THINGS I WISH TOO KILL YOU FOR and you give up. Marik and Malik would never go for a mortal, only someone like me. A TRUE immortal. No offense(actually, you should take offense and please do), but you are just a sickening little toddler who isn't even toilet trained(hey I never said I'd be COMPLETELY nice). Once you realize I'm better than you, I might just share Malik AND MALIK ONLY with you. And if your really nice I'll give him too you. I get Marik though. And if like me, you hate Tea, I'll help you torture her. Do all of this, and I'll keep my word. | | Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 › » ] |
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