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| "Not a Clue" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] | Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 21:48 CDT
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*poke poke poke* why didnt you finish?
| Reviewed By: tesp71283 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2006 17:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it, Please consider updating again
| Reviewed By: Llorona [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 22:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I think you probably have abandoned this fic (last update being over a year ago), but I hope I'm wrong. This is a FANTASTIC fic. It's one of the few fics I would consider suggesting to people who normally don't read fanfiction... it's that good. Please pick this fic back up/ update!
| Reviewed By: water-soter On: March 06, 2004 18:48 CST
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I so love your story Not A Clue, but I was wondering, when, when, WHEN are you going to write the next part of this story? I'm dying here! Please, please, please write it soon! Pretty please, I so need to read more of this story! water_soter@yahoo.com
| Reviewed By: Lil chibi On: October 18, 2003 06:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This such an awsome fic so much suspense!!! Im dyeing to no what happens I need more more More!!! Please hurry up and finish the fic I (im sure other people also)cant what any longer!!
| Reviewed By: Yamaneko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2003 05:08 CDT
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When could we see the next part? I can't wait for it. Please write more. | Reviewed By: Jadeduo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2003 19:16 CDT
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This fic is so sweet! I love it so far! You made me cry for poor Duo! I wonder what will happen, will Wufei let Duo split them apart or is he willing to share? I don't think Heero would tolerate losing his best friend... I can't wait for the vext part! | Reviewed By: black beauty On: August 10, 2003 22:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fic. It is really interesting, but from time to time it's a bit confusing, trying to figure out which of the 3 characters is speaking in first person. Despite all that, I really enjoy reading this fic and I can't wait to read the next ch. Keep up the good job. | Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2003 08:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just a gorgeous piece of fanfiction!! I'm so thoroughly impressed! It's original, it's emotional, realistic...you've given the boys real emotions without taking them out of character. I'm not ashamed to say that I had tears rolling down my cheeks two seperate times due to Duo's reactions to Hilde's loss.
You are a VERY talented writer, the flow of the story is excellent (personally I don't agree with the reviewer who thought the POV changes were confusing, I thought they flowed well and had no trouble pinpointing the "speaker"), you write in a very conversational tone, without relying on poetic, flowery words to get across the depth of emotion that you are portraying. That is VERY refreshing. I truly love this story, and will be watching for updates! Keep up the excellent work!!
^__^ | Reviewed By: Insantys_Angel On: July 31, 2003 14:46 CDT
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OMG, i loved every second....i can't wait for the next chapter | Reviewed By: AnaB On: July 31, 2003 01:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic is pretty good. All I ask for are these 4 things: keep writing, write more, write soon, and write well. I love how each part takes awhile to read. Nice and lengthy parts. You are doing fantastic. Keep up the good work.
Only problem with it is, and it's a little one, I get confused at first when the POV changes. Could you mark the POV changes?
Thanks
Your new fan | Reviewed By: Ita-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2003 08:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WWWWWWoooooWWWWWWWW,........*blink,blink*.....MMaaaaaaaaannnnnnnn,...this fic of yours is Tooootttaallllyyyyyy Ammmmmaaaaaziiiinggggggggggggggg,...*hugs,hugs*....i LLLooooooovvvvveeeeeeeeeeee it Soooooooooooooo Daaaaaaammmnnnnnn MMMuuuuuuccchhhhhhh,....continue soon Plllleaaaaaaseeeeeeee????...*puppy-dog-eyes*...and one more thing,...i've never like any threesome fic,...especialy a 1x2x5 ones,...i'm kinda a pro 1x2x1,.....but i duno,...after reading your 1x2x5,...i kinda fall in love with this threesome pairings,...maybe because of how much both duo and wufei totaly love and need heero in their lives,....how Swwwweeetttt,...*sssiiighhhhhhh* ^_~
keep-up the good work kay,...and continue soon,...add Moooorrreeeeeeeee Leeeeemmonnnyyyyyyy 1x5x1,5x1x5, and hurry-up with the 1x2x5 Leeeemoonnnnnnnnn,....*evil hentai grins*...till next chapter,....*grins*...Jaaaaaaaaaaaa and Gaaaaaannnbbbaaaatttttteeeeeeeee-Neee!!^.~!! | Reviewed By: dark cloud On: July 30, 2003 02:39 CDT
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Very nice fic you've got here. It sure has a long way to go for a 1x5x2 as it seems Wufei had a lot of issues regarding Duo that have to be overcome. Hum... what's going to happen to soften the guys up I wonder? I'll just keep reading, I guess. | Reviewed By: Vegakitty On: July 27, 2003 22:27 CDT
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Vega: Oooh! Duo and Heero and Wufei, oh my!
Wufei: *blushing* Dammit Vega! Quit it!
Vega: Awww, Wuffei-kins is all embarrassed like! I'm hooked and it's only been two chapters! I'll be keeping an eye on this one.
Wufei: *still blushing*Can we go now?
Vega: Sure... Hey Wu-hun, about this fic, don't you know that sharing is caring? *runs*
Wufei: VEGA! *chases* | Reviewed By: Insanitys_Angel13 On: July 25, 2003 17:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG PLEAAASEEEE hurry with the third chapter, i gotsta know what is gonna happen next
PWWWWWEEEEEAAAAAAAASSSSEEEEE
Lemme know ASAP
i need to know what is gonna happen with Hee-chan, Fei, and otashi no shinigami
Thanks
byes
Ps great sdtrory | Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2003 23:23 CDT
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this, is spectacular. one of the best written 1x2x5 pairings i've seen as of yet. absolutely the best. i can't wait til the next chapter. and let me tell you, when i first found out hilde died... it brought tears to my eyes. you're a great writer and i hope you get your next chapter up soon so you don' tleave me hanging. ok?
Mara | Reviewed By: Ishida Takeru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2003 04:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just great. I love the way you write Wufei. It's just so perfect. Its rare to find people who write Wufei without doing it half-arsed. And I love 5x1x5 | Reviewed By: Fallen Embers [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2003 02:58 CDT
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Wow. This story has a great beginning and you've written it so well. I look forward to the next chapter so update soon! Keep up the great work!
~ Fallen Embers | Reviewed By: hicaniplay [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 05:29 CDT
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Hmm... why didn't it post it? I'll post again then.
Oh My Gosh! This is a truly excellent fic! I can't believe more people haven't reviewed! Oh ohohoh please pleeeeaaase hurry with the next parts! :D Really I love this. I don't know exactly what it is, but you just... oh, I don't know... its just, really great :)
I MUST find more of your fanfics! Grrr! Hurry and post more chapters please! I'm begging you here! Wait, what are you doing reading this? Get writing! Stop wasting time reading dribble! Your an excellent writing, a goddess, whatever! Come on! Though, I'll boost your ego if it will get more chapters ;p
Really, more serious note - what I really liked is, well. The fact you use plain err, English. Well, I mean in your choice of language. I've not run across too many people who use the curse words so often ^_^ Trust me, I likes. Not for the words, but because they can actually portray a LOT. And its sorta novel. Hehe, you just don't really picture the GW pilots cussing, though they've every right.
Anyways, the point I'm trying to get across, is that I love the story. Please post more soon. Hope you keep up in the same style - It most definitely works! ^_^ | Reviewed By: hicaniplay [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 05:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh My Gosh! This is a truly | Reviewed By: C. L On: July 23, 2003 05:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hi! Really like this. Duo, Heero and Wufei! what more can a girl ask for? Please continue, really like the way you're portraing Heero, making him more human, me like!!!
LoL | Reviewed By: Dyna On: July 23, 2003 02:19 CDT
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Two chapters and I'm hooked. Can't wait to see how this three-way pans out. |
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