| "A lonely Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Title: jinxy_punksurfer
Reviewed By: jinxy_punksurfer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 11:24 CDT
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Wow!It was awsome! That's pretty much al I can say! You could,like,put Inuyasha and Kagome that they were spying on them and then in the morning they tease Mikal but don't reveal why they tease her. Aw, what the hell! Maybe you'll take my word for it as a writer. See ya'!
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Reviewed By: KougaLover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2004 18:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good! I love the idea. But please hurry and update k? ...Lelly
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Title: Okay Y'all here's what's happenin'
Reviewed By: ILoveSesshomaru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2003 16:01 CDT
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OMG!!!!! My comp is SO fried. It won't even turn on. I have that blaster worm thing. I'm really sorry but I won't beable to update anytime soom. I'm gonna try to update here from my "wonderful" local library, but I don't know if it'll work. Sorry, y'all.
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Reviewed By: dark angel kitty On: September 22, 2003 20:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh yea .....i dont think they should have kids just yet that would be kinda weird and they would never have time for each other lol and inuyasha would kill shippo anyway ..meow ^_~
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Title: a lonely heart
Reviewed By: dark angel kitty On: September 22, 2003 20:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved this fic , it is so cool , a wonderful idea to have kagome and inuyasha daughter and shippo together the only thing i thought should be any different was the fact that shes only 1/4 demon, since the jewel is complete wouldn't inuyasha be ful demon or human so he wont outlive kagome and his daughter that would be so sad! please hurry and write the next chapters ....kitty
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Title: Thanks again Y'all!
Reviewed By: ILoveSesshomaru [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 1969 18:00 CST
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Ok, I'm SOOOOO sorry about not updating. I had saved all my stuff to a floppy disk, and I lost the floppy.... **blushes** Sorry, I've gotta find the disk.... BUT I WILL FIND IT SOON!!!!!! TTYL! |
Reviewed By: fluffyluv On: August 13, 2003 19:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
super cool. i luv it! looks like im the tenth review so you better write more soon, k! |
Reviewed By: Eclipse On: August 11, 2003 21:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE the story so far! I agree with kirara97, they should catch up at a diner or coffee shop for breakfast or lunch somewhere in town, I think that would be a great way to tell us about their pasts and to help us get to know the characters better. pleeeez update soon its great! |
Reviewed By: kirara97 On: August 03, 2003 12:22 CDT
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hey! i was so glad to be your second reviewer and now id like to help a bit. the story is going great and i am sure i will keep reading until it is done. i think the next chapter or two should be used to have shippou and mika catch up on the past. and you didnt really describe them. i know for me it is kind of hard to imagine shippou as a grown fox deamon, but i like the idea! n-e-way.. thats my idea hope it gives you some help. tata ~_^ |
Reviewed By: ILoveSesshomaru [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 16:52 CDT
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Wow, I never expected all the reviews so quickly. Thanks y'all. ^_^ I'm glad my first fanfic got such rave reviews. ^_^ Oh, and thanks kirara97 for reminding me to give more info on shippo's looks. I'll be sure to give more details. Thanks again, y'all. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: kirara97 On: August 02, 2003 00:17 CDT
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hey me again i was proud to be your second reviewer and im sure ill keep reading until the story is done. u can count on me to help u out a bit if u need it. this story is going to be great. the only thing about the story so far that could be added i think, is that u didnt really describe mika or shippou and its kind of hard to picture shippou as a grown fox demon. or has something changed? mabe your next chapter could be about shippou and mikal catching up on old times (i think they moved a little too fast, but dont make either of them have regrets). while doing that u could have them admire eachothers looks or whatever, to get in your description. wow i wrote a lot, sry! maybe i should have sent an email instead. o well, have fun! tata ~_^ |
Reviewed By: Sundragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 18:21 CDT
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It will be a great story. I think people focus to much on Kagome's group and not the generation after. I'm the fifth so please update. |
Reviewed By: lovelylady On: July 29, 2003 00:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"u la la" ~_^ dont stop, keep writting. im definentaly going to enjoy this. |
Reviewed By: goodgurl2 On: July 27, 2003 18:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
luv it! so cool! u just have to write more! soon! please! |
Reviewed By: kirara97 On: July 24, 2003 18:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it soooooooo original.
glad to know kagome and inuyasha are parents.
please update soon! |
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