| "Unexpected Allies: Chosen, The Tosusaiga's True Master" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Reviewed By: Demoness of the Dark [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2003 15:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I can possibly say is wow!!! That was so not fair the way you left that though. Now I have to find the patience I threw in my closet, take it out and dust it off and use so I can wait until you post the continuation of this. I just love the way you write your stories. Can't wait till the next installment.
~*Demoness*~ |
Title: you got me hooked
Reviewed By: The Black Kat On: September 08, 2003 09:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ok, so you got me hooked! Do you really have to make us wait for a couple of weeks before you continue on to part III? *sighs* oh well, I guess I will just have to wait! *sniff, sniff* |
Reviewed By: Tsukitani [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2003 08:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
Okay. For once, I have to agree with Inuyasha's "I'm gonna kill that bitch!" line. *huffs* I cannot believe I have to wait...*counts on fingers*three whole weeks for the last part to begin!! Then again, I get to learn more about Narasa in between. Yay!
Thanks for the e-mail BTW. Working on Ch. 11 right now--I swear. *laughs* Well, not right now. FF.net was down for you, huh? I think about that time it was MM.org that was down for me. Maybe it depends on our ISP location? *shrugs* Who knows. All I care about is that you keep these fabulous stories going!
All hail Seishou! All hail Striking Falcon! All hail the almighty and wonderfully hilarious subduing spell! *ahem* (Maybe a little less caffiene tomorrow, eh?) Later! |
Reviewed By: The Black Kat On: September 07, 2003 11:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OK... am new to the Inuyasha scene, but I really enjoyed your story. Please update soon!
The Black Kat |
Reviewed By: Lynn000 (not signed in) On: September 06, 2003 14:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! Please continue or i'll sick inuyasha on you and i'll take off the sit necklace. |
Title: i'm SPEACHLESS...
Reviewed By: Caliko ^_^ On: September 06, 2003 12:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
WONDERFUL!!! ^_^ Can't wait for more! |
Reviewed By: MysticalAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2003 12:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MA here! Or TnT. Whatever you want to call me. *Shrug* Oh! if there's any error in this review then ihnore it. I'm eating cotton candy while typing this, so sorry. Like my review at ff.net, said, plz write more soon! Ja ne! |
Reviewed By: Haibara3 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2003 22:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hate Sess/Kag but your fic was good. I love Sesshoumaru but him getting together with Kagome sickens me. Mmmm Sesshoumaru in modern clothes (drools) |
Reviewed By: anilvr On: August 17, 2003 23:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this fic. You have a way of grabbing ahold of the reader and never letting go. Please continue soon. |
Reviewed By: Flare-Chaa On: August 16, 2003 16:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Whoo! ^____^ Wonderful! Beautiful! Fantastic! Oh yeah.. I never did say Kikyou was evil... o_O; Anyways, UPDATE!!! |
Reviewed By: kagomesirene [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2003 16:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh heck MM.org is still bitching around!Would not let me log in!!!
But back to tha chapter I think it was really great(I like the idea of Sesshou in modern cloth,too!)
Sesshou starts to like Shippou too! Yay He´s soo kawaii!And Inu was actually completly clueless about Kags headband!Well he was actually really dumbfounded as he found out!
I can`t wait for the next chapter!I wonder what Kikyou is up to?!
Well keep on writing I Love your story!
Ja ne
* kagomesirene * |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2003 20:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm not sure if you've been told/realize...but your last two chapters are out of order ^^
I was surprised that Sesshoumaru didn't kill the tiger youkai right away...could be a smart move on his part. It's good to think before acting. I love the bits about the possessive youkai and Kagome...very cute ^^ |
Reviewed By: Anonymous On: August 09, 2003 20:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
^__^ I like the Naraku thingy... It's kinda funny. Anyways, update! |
Reviewed By: Pets_are_me [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2003 15:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best fanfic I've ever read. I can't wait for the second chapter. |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2003 10:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
So nice to include Rin in the dream! What a great way to look out for her!
Poor Kagome, I wonder what Naraku could be planning. Great work ^^ |
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