| "Unexpected Allies: Chosen, The Tosusaiga's True Master" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2003 20:46 CDT
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I'm not sure if you've been told/realize...but your last two chapters are out of order ^^
I was surprised that Sesshoumaru didn't kill the tiger youkai right away...could be a smart move on his part. It's good to think before acting. I love the bits about the possessive youkai and Kagome...very cute ^^ |
Reviewed By: Anonymous On: August 09, 2003 20:19 CDT
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^__^ I like the Naraku thingy... It's kinda funny. Anyways, update! |
Reviewed By: Pets_are_me [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2003 15:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best fanfic I've ever read. I can't wait for the second chapter. |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2003 10:04 CDT
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So nice to include Rin in the dream! What a great way to look out for her!
Poor Kagome, I wonder what Naraku could be planning. Great work ^^ |
Reviewed By: sweetaznpnai4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 20:12 CDT
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oh yeah and it's funny...because when ever i read the comments thing at the end you say something about a secduale (is that the right spelling?? i try!) and you never give it to me! AHAHAH! that is until now of course...hehe! update soon! take kare! |
Reviewed By: sweetaznpnai4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 20:07 CDT
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hey! i got your email! finally you sended the time thing! ahaaha! I HAVE BEEN WAITING SO LONG! hehe! anyways, great work on the chapter. oh yes and the story you recomended...i'm gonna check that out...soon after i finish this review! duh! anyways, i read the preview to the next chapter and uhhh...is naraku gonna use kagome or is he in love with her or something?? hmmm....i wonder...anyways, I DID NOT KNOW YOU HAD A FF.NET ACCOUNT! i hardly see you ever update on there or maybe YOU do and i just don't notice it...oh well. you better update sooon! I AM looking forward to the next chapter! take kare!! ^_^ oh yeah...WHY DO YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE BETTER THEN I DO!?!?! *sigh* haha..just joking...i'm looking forward to your next chapter!! (did i already say that..sorry i got bad memory...hehe! *snorts*) |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2003 18:49 CDT
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I knew you wouldn't kill Rin...that would be too easy! Nice work...I don't know what else to say, it's not like I have any complaints or anything ^^ |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2003 22:32 CDT
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Very cute, how Sesshoumaru somewhat took over Kagome's role with Shippou.
I enjoyed the legend...I like the fact that you actually took the time to write out the legend, making everything perfectly clear for anyone reading...instead of just mentioning bits and pieces of it. |
Reviewed By: sweetaznpnai4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2003 21:09 CDT
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ahhhh very nice! you deserve must praise! (well not alot...just joking! i love your fanfic! so much action and drama! hehe!) i just started reading this fanfic today.i am very happy that you made a sequel. if you just left it where us readers didn't know what happened to kagome i would be like "whoa buddy!!" hehe..yup! anyways, thank you for putting me up on your story! when i read the ending of the second chapter i was like..."oh goodness! that's me!!" hahah! well, i didn't get the scdualle (can't spell...sad, ne?) so could you send it to me again its:
kimusume_kaoru@yahoo.com
thanks! oh yes and i want you to update soon cause this story is HOTNESS!! hehe! keep up the good work and update as soon as you can!
oh and...
YOU GOTTA SIGN UP FOR FANFICTION.NET
the reviewers are gonna love you there!! you should sign up there! uh huh! your gonna get alot of comments then your gonna feel more special because your famous and and...yeah! i know the feeling...hehe!
(oh yeah and if i got grammar and spelling mistakes...sorry!! ^_^) |
Reviewed By: Chihiro Kohaku [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2003 10:36 CDT
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PLEASE WRITE MORE LIKE I SAID PLEASE WRITE MORE!!! |
Reviewed By: Shawna On: July 29, 2003 05:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!Don't leave us hangin'......... |
Reviewed By: yukiko On: July 28, 2003 22:46 CDT
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Hey i love the fic! i really do! But i was hoping that you could make the chapters a little longer. I mean you have a lot of pages but they're a lot of reviews and i don't know what the other thing is. But i love the fic! So please hurry and add a new chapter soon! |
Reviewed By: faith On: July 28, 2003 01:55 CDT
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hiya! thank you for updating again! i'm so happy! and i know you're in ff.net too. so if you have the time, you can see my fics there too. hope you do. arigato gozaimasu
ja ne! |
Reviewed By: Mistress of Chaos On: July 28, 2003 01:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
G'day mate!
I just wanted to tell you that I absolutely love your fic!!! I think I left a review sometime during 'How to train a taiyoukai' but it was under a different name, and I think my computer was once again being stupid and deleted it, or never sent it, or something along those lines... *sigh* My comp hates me, or maybe it's just AOL... *glares at AOL screen* But anyway, I just wanted to praise you an your fanfiction author wonderful-ness. ^_^ I also wanted to ask you if you could send me your update schedule - Nikiloo6@aol.com - whenever you get a chance. Well, I guess that's about it, and I can't wait till the next chapter comes out *yay! Sesshou is being nice to Shippo!!!*does happy dance* *others:*sweatdrop* So keep up the good work, and keep having Kago kick ass - I completely cracked up at her rant at Inu by the way - I love the new attitude!!! Well, Ja for now!
~*~Niki~*~
P.S. I liked your little myth thing, most wouldn't have taken the time (*major plus in my book that you cared enough to do so*) So, grab a coke, sit back and relax... you deserve it!!!
*winks* ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Seeker of Death On: July 28, 2003 00:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I totally 100% love ur story plz plz plz plz update soon i love your story!!!! Very original like the myth update soon bai bai!!! |
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