| "Reliving the Past" Reviews/Comments [ 56 ] |
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Reviewed By: TT (Tsukitani) On: November 13, 2003 06:07 CST
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How can there be only one short chapter left?! Why, I can see this dragging out for at least, oh, I'd say five chapters more? Yes? *hopeful eyes* So good! No end! Yum!
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Reviewed By: random person On: November 09, 2003 15:05 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UUUPPPDDDAAAATTTEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sundragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2003 09:12 CST
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You are evil! Evil! Why you ask? 1- you drugged Kagome twice. 2- You didn't even have Inuyasha kill hiten yet. Update already! Please! Adios!
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Reviewed By: Tsukitani (TT) On: November 07, 2003 08:24 CST
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Gah! That's it?!?!?! *wailing, pulling hair, stomping, screaming* Okay, okay. I understand when life gets in the way of updatng fabulous stories, so...*deep breath, slow exhale* I'll try and be patient. *mutters* Emphasis on the try. ^^
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Reviewed By: Aditu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2003 07:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh no a cliffhanger! agh, while I know they make the story more intense, lol, for us readers we want to pull our hair out, or worse yours! ;) j/k Anyway great chapter, gave me the shivers the whole time Kaminari/Hiten was relating his past. As always you have a great talent for writing and I'm glad that you are sharing it with us. Can't wait for the next chapter and perhaps see how Inuyasha is going to deal with this. Keep up the excellent work. Best Wishes!
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Reviewed By: Blue Sword [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2003 10:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I read "Second Best" first, and then I was hooked. I'm glad that I read this one as well...It's gotten so interesting! Yes, at first I thought that Kaminari was Inuyasha's reincarnation, in fact I was so sure that I must have stared at the screen for ten minutes....then I handed myself the "Idiot of the Day" award (It's in a glass case! lol). I love it when authors make me feel stupid, it means that it truly is a great story if they can throw twists like those at their audiences and make them unpredictable as well...even if it comes at the expense of the readers stupidity! lol I hope you update soon. I really want to know what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Starry Dragon Knights [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2003 04:34 CST
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Great story! keep on going! A Fan and Author, Starry Dragon Knights
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Reviewed By: ME On: October 24, 2003 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love that both Inu and Kag are realizing their true feelings for each other--its so kawaii^_^ can't wait for their confrontation when they actually 'discuss' this--should be loads of fun!! now, will our hanyou hero save Kagome in time?? will Manten be there?? what the heck is really going on?? update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Tsukitani [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 13:24 CDT
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I'm on pins and needles to find out exactly what Hiten's purpose is! And I love the way Souta is a sneaky little hacker. *grins* Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Sweetapple [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2003 16:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good chapter! There are so few fics on Hiten these days. Please read my fic! Wonder what Hiten wants with Kagome and the artifacts. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: O__O On: October 13, 2003 22:02 CDT
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SHITTTTTTT!!! I WAS WRONGGGG... oh, this is kuramaandkarasu btw.... Hiten? I like him... *drools* oh sorry.. he's just cute and there are like, no fics on him anywhere... well, that's an exaggeration... there's only about 4 fics with him.... update soon dammit!!!!
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Reviewed By: Aditu On: October 10, 2003 08:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, you got me on that one, I didn't bother to find a translation of Kaminari, lol, so I didn't even think of Hiten. Heh, excellent job. Loved this chapter, and so looking forward to seeing how both Kagome and InuYasha act when either one meets up with Kaminari/Hiten, I just love the suspense, lol. I also loved how you are working InuYasha and Kagome's feelings in all this. Keep up the great work and thanks for the update! Best Wishes
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Reviewed By: Tsukitani (TT) On: October 09, 2003 22:29 CDT
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*slaps self upside the head* Well, now that you let the secret out, I can plainly see how damned OBVIOUS it is! "Kaminari", indeed. *grumble grumble* Four years of university Japanese, all gone to waste. *sigh* But I absolutely adore authors who side swipe me like that! *huggles* Thank you for the great surprise! It promises great things for the future of this amazing fic.
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Reviewed By: Miara [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2003 22:09 CDT
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Ok. I'm liking the story. But ... Kagome isn't nearly self-centred enough to hear Kaminari was suspended and immediately assume it was because of her. Profs get suspended for a lot of things; it might be better to have one of the girls mention *why* (or at least pass on the distorted gossip reason) as well as the fact of the suspention, to give her something to base the assumption on.
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Reviewed By: RED HAT On: October 09, 2003 18:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiten??? U must be Kidding???@_@ Sure fooled me. He was cute, but now that explains his attitude while Kag was a sleep!! But why him?? I wanted her to have a relationship with a future Sess or Inuyasha! Well Inuyasha still has hope!!!! Of course Hiten may turn out to be a real "thunder" in bed HeHeHeHe!!!
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