| "My Report on Vampires" Reviews/Comments [ 44 ] |
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Reviewed By: Evil Chibi Malik On: August 01, 2003 10:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ yes! Yami finally comes in the fic! WHEEEEEE! Y/Y forever!!!!! kawaii-ness!!! oops...i'm getting off topic....gomen....onegai continue! EVIIIIIIL CLIFFIE!!! EEEEEVIL!!!! please upsdate soon! |
Reviewed By: jean On: July 31, 2003 14:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ps
i love vampire fics!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2003 12:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yami is going to save Yuugi? I hope you post more soon. I like this story so far. |
Reviewed By: cerridwen On: July 31, 2003 12:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ooo...this is very good so far. Definitely continue! |
Reviewed By: Dark Angel 101 On: July 31, 2003 10:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this story is great so far i like the vampire idea, and PLEASE try to update when the next chapter is up. |
Reviewed By: Millenia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2003 09:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
This very good! Kick those bullies butt Yami! hehe! ^^ |
Reviewed By: Yugi_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2003 03:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
OW me like very much!! ^___^
Hope you continue soon! Great work! |
Reviewed By: Kaji The Bloody Harlequin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2003 21:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DO MORE! and email me when you update...my email is blacktygers@msn.com |
Reviewed By: Charmeleon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2003 20:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Make your chapters longer. I'm not sure how you can't see that you're interrupting your own flow. That's a terrible strike against you when it comes to writing. I'm not criticizing you, but make your chapters longer. The flow will come out more clearly. |
Reviewed By: Sourcery [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2003 08:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
okay, good start. |
Reviewed By: Yugi_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2003 03:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
Love vampire story's^__^!
Please continue soon! |
Reviewed By: Mary Ann On: July 25, 2003 19:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow that was good can't wait to see what will happen next update soon. |
Reviewed By: crystal crittenden On: July 25, 2003 17:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Really cool. I really do like it. Please,update when your next chapter is up? |
Reviewed By: Riley Maxwell [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 23:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I Luv Y/Y! And I Luv ur story! Pleez write more soon, I enjoy reading this a lot. |
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