| "The Darkest Tournament" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] |
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Reviewed By: Green-Lantern [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 20:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
my characters girlsfriends name is Tana to |
Reviewed By: Angle Blade [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 19:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Name: Angle
Gender: Male
Age:14
Race:Human
Hair: Silver
Eyes: Ice Blue
Height: 5'6"
Clothes: Black cargo pants, black tanktop, black leather gloves, and a black leather jacket
Weapons: None
Attacks: Thunder Strike (Series of lighting strikes)
Angle Blast (Blast of energy that disenegrates every thing in its path)
Prsonality: Calm, Collective, doesn't talk much
Reason to fight: To beat Yusuke
Family/ Friends: None
Team: Medamrai |
Reviewed By: Darkside574 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2003 20:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
Added attack to Angelus
Dragon King Mode:When Angelus is beaten to within an inch of his life his rage bursts forth and spikes begin to rip out of every part of his body and deep black scales appear around him.The transformation finally ends by his face strecthing out and becoming dragon like while a long 12 foot tail grows behind him.In this form he has no spirit energy but his sheer brute strength is unbelieveably overwhellming and his scaled hide makes it hard to damage him but not imposible. |
Reviewed By: shadowz On: July 26, 2003 06:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
These two go together and have to be on the same team since they are lovers and would never fight each other and rynn is the only person ayoki trusts though you can make her like some of her team mates
Name: Ayoki Rei
Gender: Female
Age: 123 (looks about 21)
Race: Demon
Hair: waist length straight black with longish bangs and red tips
Eyes: slanted gold with cat like pupils
Extra: she has pale skin and pointed ears and nails that look like claws
Height: 5'7
Cloths: long black fingerless gloves tight black strapless top that laces up the front red knee length low riding skirt that is slit up both sides all the way to her hips and thigh high black boots
Weapon: Black bladed scythe
Attacks: (1) energy sycthe were she channels her energy into her scythe making it stronger
(2) she can create dozens of razor sharp peices of energy which she then hurls at the enemy
(3)her ultimate attack is where she calls a large pheonix made of flame to attack her opponent
(4) her tears can heal
Personality: she is very cold seeming on the outside never showing her emotions. she doesn't trust anyone but when she does she is very loyal and will die to protect them and they see a slightly softer side of her she hates most humans because she was capture for a time by one who wished to harvest her tears believing they held the key to imortallity because of this she seldom ever cries
Reason to Fight in the Tournament: she has been promised revenge on the ones that imprisoned her if she wins
Friends/Family watching the Tournament: her family is dead and she has no friends
Team: Tasugi
Name: Rynn Kyell
Gender: Male
Age: 92 (looks about 23)
Race: Half demon half human (if don't want that all human
Hair: black shoulder length
Eyes: very pale blue
Height: 6'1
Extra: he has golden brown skin and a barbed wire tatoo around is right arm
Cloths: soft black leather pants, and dark blue vest
Weapon: large sword with blowing blue runes down the blade that he carries strapped to his back
Attacks: (1) he can channel lightning through his sword
(2)he can throw lightning balls
(3)he can activae the runes on his sword so that anything that comes in contact with it gets blow apart
Personality: he's soft spoken and very smart until you get him mad which takes alot but when you do he will do anything to take you down and when he fights he tends to get a smart mouth
Reason to Fight in the Tournament: to prove to his demon father that he is strong and because ayoki is fighting
Friends/Family watching the Tournament: his human mother is dead, but his father louke is there he's mean and not really supportive
Team: Tasugi
my e-mail is pikachu2nd@webtv.net if you need to contact me. |
Reviewed By: Blossem On: July 25, 2003 23:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Name:Blossem
Gender:female
Age:100
Race:fire demon
Hair:purple
Eyes:brown
Height:5'
Cloths:a black one sleeved,belly shirt[she looks good - don't worry] the shirt has a black sheer ribbon hanging from the one sleeve[cotten],- a low rise black skort[cotten],-a metal hip hugger belt,- black,ankle high, side zipper, 1/2",suade boots[oddly she does amzingly good even with boots]
Weapon:big sword
Attacks:ONE*volcano sword-her sword heats up as hot as lava in a volcano then when she hits her enemy lava will capture her opponent i a shpere and at her word it implodes
TWO*cherishing flame-a flame encircles anyone she desires and heals them[after she does this she can't use her spirit energy]
THREE*Hell's Guardian-her speed increases 30%, her sword gets sharper, an inferno starts as a forcefield[this inferno only she can get through-not even other fire demons can]then a dragon circles her sword-when she hits the sword will slice though to make sure the opponent is dead the dragon kills the opponent by eating them
FOUR*Inferno Dragon-the dragon in her[she has learned to control it]comes out and will either bite the opponent or set them on fire if it bites it will strike 3 times
Personality:stubborn, outgoing, spontanious, intelligent, head strong, quiet, caring, mysterious, independent
Reason to fight in the tournament:she wants to show Hiei how strong she is-she has a crush on him also her life is boring
Friends/family watching the tournament: none[unless you count her hopefully future husband-she loves hiei]
Team:Tasugi Team |
Reviewed By: Darkside574 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 21:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
Name:Angelus
Gender:Male
Age:32
Race:Human
Hair:Black
Eyes:Green
Height:6'0"
Clothing:Black Leather Jacket,White T-Shirt and a pair of ripped blue jeans.
Weapon:His Body
Attacks-
Blazing Inferno:Angelus concentrates his spirit energy into a focused spot and unleashes a wave of flames directly at his oponent.
Ice Blade:Angelus forms a blade of ice in his right or left hand which is equal in strength and dexterity to a regular katana.
Final Spark:When Angelus becomes desperate and feels as though his odds of survival are slim he gathers all of his spirit energy into his palm and fires a huge wave of energy at his oponent ussually defeating them but it leaves Angelus completely drained of all energy.
Personality:He is exactly like Jin the wind master.
Reason For Fighting:To find his place in life and to test his strength against the strongest fighters.
Friends and Family watching Tournament:His wife Regina and brothers Sendo and Kento(who have the same abilities as him)
Team:Medamari |
Reviewed By: Darkside574 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 21:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
Name:Angelus
Gender:Male
Age:340 |
Reviewed By: Green-Lantern [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 20:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
I just remembered this.my guy also trys to make friends sometimes |
Reviewed By: Fox Mistress On: July 25, 2003 18:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
I've dcided on an age, Looks like she's a teenager, but is probably somewhere around a millenia. |
Reviewed By: Fox Mistress On: July 25, 2003 18:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Name:Kita
Gender:female
Age:unknown
Race:ice demon
Hair:ice blue
Eyes:light green
height:5'9"
Clothes:blue, sleeveless, midriff shirt, green pants, and knee high, blue boots.
Weapons: Kitana
Attacks:ice serpant- The climate becomes colder, snow and ice begin to fall from the sky, a flying serpant is formed from snow and ice faling from the sky.
Mist of Ice- a barrier of ice that forms around a selected area.
Ice fortess- a barrier that blocks most attacks.
Blades of Ice- several small but deadly ice shard shot out from the owners hand.
Or else she will use her amazing speed and ner good sword techniques.
Personality: Ati-social, thinks she's evil Kinevil(I watched the Gundam Wing series too many times.) Though this girl likes to have another presence in the room. She only speaks when spoken to,or if she has something very importan to say.(She sounds a lot like me.)
Reason to fight: She likes to.
Friend, family watching the touniment: none
Team: Tasugi |
Reviewed By: Fasha Youkai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 18:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
OK! Sorry when i said demon or human only i meant demon or humans only in the story. i had a person tell me their race was 1/2 Saiyan half fairy demon. sorry if i confused every one... *hangs head low as she walks back to her room.* |
Reviewed By: Green-Lantern [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 18:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
He also has a girlfriend who he thinks is dead watching the tournament.She put her self in suspended shortly after Akame was put in it.She also looks like she is 16 years old. but is really somewhere around 500 years old since that is what age they were put into suspended animation. sorry i didn't put this in the other review. |
Reviewed By: Green-Lantern [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 18:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
Name:Akame
Gender:Male
Age:looks 15 but really is somewhere over 500.
Race: Demon
Hair:Jet Black
Eyes: Green
Height: 5'6
Cloths:Has clothes just like hiei
Weapon: morogai/ a long bo which can becme any weapon ex.nunchucks, sword etc.
(incase you didnt know a bo is a wooden pole)
Attacks: Kotonai- Creates a sword out of his bo and sends a slash of spirit energy at hiss opponent.
Goronai- creates a pair of nunchucks from is Bo and extends the chain to wrap around his opponent and electrocutes them.
Potoronai- Spins his Bo extremely fast which creates a whirlwind of energy and sends it at his opponent.
Mortai-creates a ball of energy in his hand and shoots it at his opponent.
Personality: Silent, tends to keep to himself
Reason to Fight in the Tournament:He is fighting to regain the honor and reputation he had 500 years ago since he was kept in suspended animation a wizard back then.
Friends/Family watching the Tournament:none
Team:Tasugi Team
He is also right handed |
Reviewed By: Ryuujn On: July 25, 2003 17:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
Name:Ryoshi
Gender:Male
Age:Unknown
Race:Demon
Hair:Brown
Eyes:Black
Height:6'2"
Clothes:Black robe with hood, black karate gi underneath with ripped sleeves.
Wepons:morohanotsurugi/two-sided sword
Attacks:Chouonsoku-supersonic speed
Tenma nami-a burst of energy that can be released in great amounts, knocking enemies all over the arena.
Kuroi kyuutai-a simpl but effective orb of dark energy.
Personality: not sociable, prefers to be alone
Reason to Fight:To cause pain and suffering to others.
Friends & or Family Watching the Tournament:None
Team:Tasugi |
Reviewed By: Fox Mistress [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2003 12:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Cool!! Can't wait to read the rest. I agree. there is too much black, but hey, i'm not complaining, it's one of my favorite colors (besides blue,and green.)
Update soon! i'm dying to read more!! |
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