| "Torn Apart" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Title: great fic!
Reviewed By: Zdawg [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2003 15:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luved ur story!!! it's not those kind of stories where they make hiei and kurama gay. it's great!!! usually i wouldn't read these types of stories, but yours REALLY caught my attention^_^ update soon or i'll get my chainsaw ready, trust me, i tried using it on kuwabara and karasu before....... |
Reviewed By: midnitedreams On: August 01, 2003 13:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought Yusuke was going to kill those people for sending him away with Raizen. Anyway, it was funny. Poor Hiei. He's going to be permanently blind. It was a great story! Keep writing! |
Reviewed By: TheDefinitionOfDarkness On: July 30, 2003 11:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is a great story! Great plot! And I promise that if you stop writing....*Smirks and snickers* You don't want to know what I'll do if you stop writing. |
Reviewed By: ssj On: July 29, 2003 22:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man this fic is great! interesting. Yay! continue ^_^ PLEASE! this is pretty original. No one has ever done something like this CONTINUE OR ELSE! MUAHAHAHAHAHA!
j/k..just continue ^_^ |
Reviewed By: HardCandyVegetto On: July 28, 2003 22:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is novel and I am looking forward to updates. Let's just not ruin it with sex for no reason like so many other decent fics. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: kaisei41 On: July 28, 2003 15:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very interesting so far. I can't wait to find out who this relative is. It'd be funny to see a scene where the social workers are trying to get Yusuke to come with them. *snicker* I can just see him blowing up the Social Workers' Van.
Good job and update soon. |
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