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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lovers [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2005 17:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice i just finished reading the last 12 chapters so im kindof crosed eyes at the moment but i seriosely enjoid reading it i rilly hope the next one comes out soon
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Title: YOU ROCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Venomous_Angel_of_Hades [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 01:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um that review from sango16 was from me. Sorry I forgot she was on the comp before me and signed in to her account. She's my sister and I always get on after her and then get lost in a story and forget I'm still on her account. However I still want you to know you rock!!!! Sincerely your fan, Vaoh Ta Ta For Now
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Title: YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU ROCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: sango16 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 01:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!!! *blows noise maker* My character's here!! Yumi: sorry but she's been waiting ever since she sent you that email. LV: Yay and might I say you did a splendid job on giving them personalities. Oh and adding Kurama as her friend cool. However I must ask is the rest of her gang going to be there if they are you rock and if they aren't you still rock, OH YEAH!!! So anyway loved the new chapter I've been waiting, what seems like forever, for this and it was great. I think that Hiei needs to let what Yusuke did go. He's retrained his entire body to adjust to fighting with only one eye. I think that deserves a very big pat on the back. *pats herself on the back* Also I think that Yusuke should stop being such a jerk about what happened because what Hiei did to him is way worse then what he let happen to Hiei, in a way Hiei was just trying to protect Yusuke and Kayko's relationship. So let me tell you that's probably the one nice thing Hiei's going to do for about the next century *another pat*. Anyway I love the new chapter and as always it was well written, I never expected Hiei to become allergic like that. Oh and I just want to tell you I read your story Venom and it rocked but I can't tell you how much since I'm running out of characters sadly enough, one time I even got to zero but that's another story. Ne way please update soon I'm waiting on the edge of my seat and please don't take so long to update next time. Sincerely your reader, Vaoh Ta Ta For Now
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Reviewed By: _Luna_ [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 00:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!anyway i know how you feel.i have writers block sooooo bad i cant see strait!!! hehe. update soon -moon
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Reviewed By: Lya [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 19:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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i like! i like! can't wait till the next chapter!! yay!
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Reviewed By: Venomous_Angel_of_Hades [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 14:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I got emails saying you revised your chaps so I read them all and they still rock. But poor poor Hiei. I hope you update soon I've been waiting forever. Sincerely your fan, Vaoh Ta Ta For Now *Minions return empty handed* Lady Vaoh: where are they? Sarad: they refused to come with us said they were too busy. Lady Vaoh: did you tell them who I was? Ryack: yes milady but they didn't believe us. Lady Vaoh: exactly what were they doing. Ryack: *sheepishly* they were um torturing Hiei mistress. Lady Vaoh: WHAAAAT!?!?!? Revenge will be mine. They shall never forget the day they crossed my path.
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Reviewed By: hiei obsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2004 19:38 CST
Comment/Review:
it's really good... i can't wait till i read the rest ^^
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Reviewed By: Hiei Obsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2004 19:38 CST
Comment/Review:
it's really good... i can't wait till i read the rest ^^
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Title: HIEI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Venomous_Angel_of_Hades [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2004 22:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great I love it but I do have a few questions. First, WHY DO YOU HAVE TO MESS WITH HIEI MY BELOVED FIRE DEMON!?!?!?!?!?! Second, CAN I PRETTY PLEASE BE INSERTED IN THIS FIC!?!?!?! I WOULD LIKE NO LOVE BEYOND ALL REASONS TO KILL KURO AND RAIZEN!?!?!?!?! For my love Hiei of course. Anyway all though Hiei has been tortured I absolutely love this fic it's great and really creative. UPDATE SOON OR I'LL SEND MY EVIL DEMON ARMIES AFTER YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Just ask Firelung06. Sincerely your fan, Vaoh Ta Ta For Now Lady Vaoh: MINIONS!!!! *Minions come running*Ryack: yes Lady Vaoh? Lady Vaoh: Bring me Kuro and Raizen from the story Torn Apart. Sarad: yes Lady Vaoh of course. *both run away to do my bidding Lady Vaoh: they will pay for what they have done to my beloved Hiei. Buwahahahahahahahahahaha *trails off laughing evily*
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Title: great fic!
Reviewed By: Zdawg [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2003 15:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luved ur story!!! it's not those kind of stories where they make hiei and kurama gay. it's great!!! usually i wouldn't read these types of stories, but yours REALLY caught my attention^_^ update soon or i'll get my chainsaw ready, trust me, i tried using it on kuwabara and karasu before....... |
Reviewed By: midnitedreams On: August 01, 2003 13:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought Yusuke was going to kill those people for sending him away with Raizen. Anyway, it was funny. Poor Hiei. He's going to be permanently blind. It was a great story! Keep writing! |
Reviewed By: TheDefinitionOfDarkness On: July 30, 2003 11:24 CDT
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This is a great story! Great plot! And I promise that if you stop writing....*Smirks and snickers* You don't want to know what I'll do if you stop writing. |
Reviewed By: ssj On: July 29, 2003 22:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man this fic is great! interesting. Yay! continue ^_^ PLEASE! this is pretty original. No one has ever done something like this CONTINUE OR ELSE! MUAHAHAHAHAHA!
j/k..just continue ^_^ |
Reviewed By: HardCandyVegetto On: July 28, 2003 22:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is novel and I am looking forward to updates. Let's just not ruin it with sex for no reason like so many other decent fics. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: kaisei41 On: July 28, 2003 15:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very interesting so far. I can't wait to find out who this relative is. It'd be funny to see a scene where the social workers are trying to get Yusuke to come with them. *snicker* I can just see him blowing up the Social Workers' Van.
Good job and update soon. |
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