"To Tell Of Your Love" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] |
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Reviewed By: GundamJacob [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2003 16:03 CDT Comment/Review: Yeah, put a lemon in later, I don't care if it's Honda/Anzu, Ryou/Bakura, Yami/Yugi, just put in one! |
Reviewed By: Fallen Hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2003 15:52 CDT Comment/Review: hey--
hoorah! another yami/yugi fic! i love these....they're my favorite pairing. nice job so far---except that you made yugi get hit by a car!!
yugi: yeah, why'd you have to do that?
yami: so she could let me make all better aibou. *huggles his hikari*
awwww.....it's all so kawaii!
keep up the great work and please update soon! i can't wait to read more!
~*Fallen Hikari*~ ^__^
and about a lemon.... you have to ask?! hell yeah! you NEED to write one! |
Reviewed By: ccam3 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 17:56 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: it's cool but make anzu die dramticly at the hands of yami.yeah,that'd be cool... |
Reviewed By: PreventerPixie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2003 22:36 CDT Comment/Review: please hurry with the next chapter...i love y/y! lol
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