Reviewed By: matzes1 On: March 23, 2005 11:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a good story. You should keep writing the story. Though you did make some grammar and spelling mistakes and some parts of the story were missing, but that could just be my computer. Keep writing, and great plot to the story. I give it a nine out of ten because of the grammar and spelling mistakes. Other than that it was a GREAT story. I would typed a better word than great, but I am not good speller.
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