| "Woodin Cylinders And Red Herrings" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: AngelHeart On: December 04, 2003 18:45 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed reading this story and I hope you write more soon ^_^
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Title: turn about is fair play
Reviewed By: stesnus [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2003 14:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved the story i really got in to and it wasn't boring at all can't wait to read one of your other fan fictions... and about that one with kagome and having inuyasha's name on her i'm almost positive that it's name is turn about is fair play...hope i helped....
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Title: Great story! :)
Reviewed By: Ranae On: November 19, 2003 03:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. I thought about Inu a few times but I thought SOMEONE would choose both him and Gome herself being the cause and decided to instead try one of the less likely guessable ones but which I still thought were possible. I'm not disappointed I guessed wrong though cause the way you've got it is good too maybe even better? I'm kinda confused about the explanation though. How exactly did things get equalized? I mean Kagome's got a tattoo on her that her mother could possibly punish her for plus if she ever ended up with some other mate than Inu she'd have some major problems. Also I really don't see how anyone can say that something as embarassing as that as the mark is equal to a necklace of beads around a neck that most of the time can't even see as anything special. Plus the whole hissing thing... how's that equal? Inu gets mad at Gome all the time and calls her names and insults her and never gets a speach impairment but Gome's now got a permanent one and not just for when she's saying 'SIT' either. What if she's in modern day Tokyo and she gets mad in school or something? She'd become like a social leper. I was born slightly tongue-tied so hard problems pronunciating some of my words as a kid and still have problems when I don't concentrate so I know how mean people can get about that. That isn't at all equal! I mean if wanted to make her unable to say the sit word why not just make her voice go mute for a few minutes anytime she tries to say the word, it'd do the same thing and without giving her a permanent social disability. I can just see the kids taunting 'SNAKE-GIRL, SNAKE-GIRL!!! HA HA HA', and sticking their tongues out at her tauntingly like a snake tasting the air, now! :( Other than that though this was a really good story and I hope you write more like it so can read those too. Thanks for writing this and allowing people like me to read and enjoy!
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Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2003 15:06 CST
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I loved this fanfic, and i really enjoyed guessing who it was. I just cant believe that i was right and just had to change my answer. maybe you might try showing like a month or two later as the epilogue, kinda to show what the results of the spell are. this is going to haunt me for a while, this is deffinitely going to haunt me *shakes his head in a slightly depressed way*. well hope you can finish this story very well. and thanks for pointing out all of the clues, its always nice to know what i missed.
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Title: I guess...
Reviewed By: Ranae On: November 03, 2003 13:44 CST
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Kaede... kidding... actually I'm going to go with a nonentity... I say the Shikon no Tama is Kagome's new 'master'. It'd like having its wielder/protector to be stronger to defend itself plus if Kagome was open about her thoughts to Inu-Yasha it would be more likely that there'd be two strong protectors of the jewel rather than just one. So yeah the Shikon Jewel is the one that contacted Tora to do the spells. ;)
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Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2003 15:23 CST
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im probably wrong, but my guess will stay the same. if it wasnt for that, i might actually think that it might be sesshomarou. you pretty much just made it so that none of the people in their group aren't the owners of the spell, but it would still be interesting. well, good luck with the rest, this is a very good mystery, although i wasn't able to see many clues that may have been given.
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Reviewed By: Morlana [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2003 21:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story, can't wait to find out who did it. Could it be Kaede? I bet she's tired of Inu and Kags always fighting.
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Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2003 11:53 CDT
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I am probably going to be going from one character to another in this, but i just have to at least suggest kagome. i think that it might be something if that were to happen (although not too likely). so i guess my vote is now for kagome, if for no more than a comedic thought
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Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2003 11:46 CDT
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this is a very good story, and the only clue that you really seem to have given (that i can see) is that a person might seem to be wanting to get kagome and inuyasha together. although sensory depravation is something noone should go through, i kinda feel sorry for kagome.
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 23:44 CDT
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KIAAA!!! please write more sooooon!1!!! *gets on knees* MOREOMOREOMREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORE!!!!!!!! *sniffle* please...
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Reviewed By: Nemisis On: August 22, 2003 18:45 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
..i bet its just a test... ...but then the author welds this power of decision |
Reviewed By: avarinnia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 02:29 CDT
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because he wants kagome lol ^-^ |
Reviewed By: avarinnia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 02:27 CDT
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its Kouga lol thats my guess ^-^ |
Reviewed By: Eartha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2003 16:44 CDT
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I think Dusty is on my list of best original characters!! She was great...pixie shit ::laughs::. This is an interesting story, I can't wait till more of the plot unfolds!! Ja! |
Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 17:05 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very awesome story, with a nice reason to actually pay attention to the story.
although kouga might not be a bad guess, he probably wouldn't want inuyasha's name on kagome.
I personally think that it might be inuyasha, because he feels resentful for the rosary being put on him and might want revenge (not to mention he probably likes her) |
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