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Reviewed By: Ooahati Elf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 10:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hrm...well it seemed a little rushed...yet I liked it! ^_^ Plot what Plot? gotta love 'em! ^_^
~Zufluchtsort~ |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: August 01, 2003 04:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
*gg* The last line was really kawaii and funny. This was cool and yummy lemon goodness. Arigato! Jaaaa! |
Reviewed By: Bishoonenlover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2003 00:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
I liked how there was not even half of a paragraph
of bull and you cut right to the lemon...but it still wasn't enough lemon!OH MY GOD!WHAT"S WRONG WITH ME!O.o |
Reviewed By: Fallen Hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2003 22:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey---
that was fantastic! i love PWPs.....who needs a plot anyway? i'm fine if an author or authoress just sprays a hint of lemon air freshener in their fics. and i'm hooked.
it was sooooooo hot! loved how you expressed their GREAT need for one another.
Seto: yeah, that was fun.
Joey: i agree, write another one.
don't bug them!
Seto: what about you? aren't you working on a one-shot about us right now?
Joey: yeah, that's right....you've been working on it for like three weeks now. what's taking you so long?
Seto: she's using work as an excuse....
hey! i work up to twelve hours some days! i'm tired! and i'm not sure what i want to do with you guys....
Joey: well, whatever you're going to write, do it soon! we're starting to feel left out.
Seto: yeah, you've already written one-shots with yami/yugi, bakura/ryou, noa/mokuba, and bakura/otogi....what about us? where is the justice?!
hush up....anyway, now that they are done ranting....wonderful job. *gives you lots of cookies and yu-gi-oh plushies for doing a great PWP*
keep up the great work! toodles!
~*Fallen Hikari*~ ^__^ |
Reviewed By: ACIDFLOWER [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2003 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ great I like it |
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