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Reviewed By: Mika_Kitty666 On: August 18, 2004 18:32 CDT Comment/Review: Nice!! Now that was one kick @$$ PWP!! I totally say you should continue man, cause no noe likes unfinished stories or PWPs!
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Reviewed By: Alraune [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 15:59 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: What a weird pairing with Malik, Marik and Otogi. But it was nice, you made it really good. Though, I wonder why you stopped... -_- You should continue! More Jou/Seto !!! hahaha ^_^'
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Anzu Basher On: January 11, 2004 20:48 CST Comment/Review: That was great! Why'd you stop....:(
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Reviewed By: ChaosHarbour On: November 27, 2003 10:43 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Excellent! Anything qith lemon is gooood... Kitty: Oh shut up. Unless you get started on your newest Seto x Katsuya story with Noa x Mokouba...u.u; I'm going to hit you. IIE!!! -Runs off to finish her story.- Keep updating please! I enjoyed it!
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Reviewed By: purplechaos04 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2003 19:43 CST Comment/Review: awesome!
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Reviewed By: purplechaos04 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2003 19:54 CDT Comment/Review: Hehe, this gets better every time I read it.
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Reviewed By: firebirdy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2003 22:54 CDT Comment/Review: That was great. You don't see too many t/j/s fics around. Keep on writing. |
Reviewed By: purplechaos04 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2003 20:21 CDT Comment/Review: That a great pwp!! I liked the little comedy bits you snuck in there, whether they were on purpose or not. Great writing, even though I don't usually like 3somes I liked this story ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Momma Cat On: September 03, 2003 00:40 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Ok I wasn't paying much attention to 'Style of Writing' or 'Originnality' but it's safe to say this was a GREAT story...ok any lemon filled story is good for me but this was exceptional.Good Job. |
Reviewed By: JoeysGal On: August 05, 2003 22:40 CDT Comment/Review: I hate it how everyone is turning Joey and Seto and Yugi and all the rest into fags! But I gotta admit that the writing you have got is pretty well done, I've got a fanfic coming out pretty soon too but I'm not sure if I should put it up or not, anyway, good job. |
Reviewed By: Ooahati Elf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 10:21 CDT Comment/Review: Hrm...well it seemed a little rushed...yet I liked it! ^_^ Plot what Plot? gotta love 'em! ^_^
~Zufluchtsort~ |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: August 01, 2003 04:20 CDT Comment/Review: *gg* The last line was really kawaii and funny. This was cool and yummy lemon goodness. Arigato! Jaaaa! |
Reviewed By: Bishoonenlover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2003 00:46 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review: I liked how there was not even half of a paragraph
of bull and you cut right to the lemon...but it still wasn't enough lemon!OH MY GOD!WHAT"S WRONG WITH ME!O.o |
Reviewed By: Fallen Hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2003 22:23 CDT Comment/Review: hey---
that was fantastic! i love PWPs.....who needs a plot anyway? i'm fine if an author or authoress just sprays a hint of lemon air freshener in their fics. and i'm hooked.
it was sooooooo hot! loved how you expressed their GREAT need for one another.
Seto: yeah, that was fun.
Joey: i agree, write another one.
don't bug them!
Seto: what about you? aren't you working on a one-shot about us right now?
Joey: yeah, that's right....you've been working on it for like three weeks now. what's taking you so long?
Seto: she's using work as an excuse....
hey! i work up to twelve hours some days! i'm tired! and i'm not sure what i want to do with you guys....
Joey: well, whatever you're going to write, do it soon! we're starting to feel left out.
Seto: yeah, you've already written one-shots with yami/yugi, bakura/ryou, noa/mokuba, and bakura/otogi....what about us? where is the justice?!
hush up....anyway, now that they are done ranting....wonderful job. *gives you lots of cookies and yu-gi-oh plushies for doing a great PWP*
keep up the great work! toodles!
~*Fallen Hikari*~ ^__^ |
Reviewed By: ACIDFLOWER [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2003 20:58 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: ^_^ great I like it |
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