| "Now is the time for Family" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: kitkat On: August 30, 2003 17:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hi there!
I don't have any ideas to give you. You're already going very well. So i'm here to say that i'm looking forward the next chapter. ^^
ja ne. |
Reviewed By: Kirikou [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2003 06:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
*agrees with Bardockgurl*
Yeah, I wonder how raditz and bardock are gonna react when they meet the family :p
Too bad Thales isn't there to join the family, oh well ^^
it's a great story, hope you update soon ^^ |
Reviewed By: dragonzmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2003 22:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yippie! They get to come back to life. I love this idea! Please update soon!!! |
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2003 15:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hmmm, like your other reviewers, I really like the idea of this story... Bardock alive and well... mmmmmmm :D
"I'm right here..."
Yes, I know - but in stories, you're usually dead.. :(
Please hurry up and continue - I want to see how my hunny bunny copes with his new found family!! :D |
Reviewed By: Tha E-Double On: August 02, 2003 11:40 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really like the idea of Radditz, Bardck, and the King getting a second chance at life. I'm excited to see how they all adjust :) |
Reviewed By: alfa star On: August 01, 2003 18:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey this story sounds intresting.I cant wait to see if the newbies can cope with a peaceful life. write again soon |
Reviewed By: Tha Sayjin Kira [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 14:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
yeah !my beloved radditz is alive again!!!!
I hope you continue this story I'm really intersted to see how those three sexy sayjin handel life on earth! |
Reviewed By: rebel On: July 30, 2003 23:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, I like the begining it shows promise write again soon |
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