| "Now is the time for Family" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: tracey3 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2003 19:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry Im not very good at reviews but here it goes. I am not a writer nor would I ever even consider it but I know what I like. I think your writing technique is very good and it is easy to read unlike some. Your storyline is a nice change. I do find myself looking almost everyday for a new chap. I do think you are a very good writer. thank you
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Reviewed By: Silver Queen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2003 03:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great I loved reading this!! For the last bit shoulnt it be all FIVE limbs intact? he still has his tail right? Any way Gokus introductions where funny and the whole Pan thing really made me crack up.
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Reviewed By: Mwhahaha Hater On: September 28, 2003 15:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok well i don't share his creepy ass enthusiasm but yes please do continue this fic... it ain't half bad.
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Reviewed By: Mwhahaha On: September 21, 2003 00:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
See now this is what I'm talking about in a fic. Stick to the good subjects and you'll be fine. Re-write episodes of the show... and well you're screwed! |
Reviewed By: Mephostopheles On: September 20, 2003 10:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good stuff. Keep going. If you quit... i will find you. Mwhahahaha |
Reviewed By: Nutin' On: September 18, 2003 07:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think the story is great1 i would have never thought of sumthing like this! Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: kitkat On: September 17, 2003 22:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
hell yes! you should continue for sure. i didn't read the new chapter yet but i'm answering to your request in the summary. I think you should continue because thera are lots of people who like a lot these stories where family interact, i'm one of these. ^^
if this review apear more than once it's due to problems when i hit "submit" button. this is the fourth try. |
Reviewed By: kitkat On: August 30, 2003 17:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hi there!
I don't have any ideas to give you. You're already going very well. So i'm here to say that i'm looking forward the next chapter. ^^
ja ne. |
Reviewed By: Kirikou [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2003 06:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
*agrees with Bardockgurl*
Yeah, I wonder how raditz and bardock are gonna react when they meet the family :p
Too bad Thales isn't there to join the family, oh well ^^
it's a great story, hope you update soon ^^ |
Reviewed By: dragonzmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2003 22:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yippie! They get to come back to life. I love this idea! Please update soon!!! |
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2003 15:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hmmm, like your other reviewers, I really like the idea of this story... Bardock alive and well... mmmmmmm :D
"I'm right here..."
Yes, I know - but in stories, you're usually dead.. :(
Please hurry up and continue - I want to see how my hunny bunny copes with his new found family!! :D |
Reviewed By: Tha E-Double On: August 02, 2003 11:40 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really like the idea of Radditz, Bardck, and the King getting a second chance at life. I'm excited to see how they all adjust :) |
Reviewed By: alfa star On: August 01, 2003 18:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey this story sounds intresting.I cant wait to see if the newbies can cope with a peaceful life. write again soon |
Reviewed By: Tha Sayjin Kira [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 14:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
yeah !my beloved radditz is alive again!!!!
I hope you continue this story I'm really intersted to see how those three sexy sayjin handel life on earth! |
Reviewed By: rebel On: July 30, 2003 23:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, I like the begining it shows promise write again soon |
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