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Reviewed By: Lil_inu222 On: September 23, 2003 18:23 CDT
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nooooooooo cliffy why?...do u like taunting ur readers like this?!!!! well i wont stanfd for it u better update and update now!!!!(just to let u know this all means thati loved ur fic!!!^-^)
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2003 23:28 CDT
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Hey your in school right? That has to be why you left us with such a heart stopping cliffhanger, ne? Well I'll give you another week are so before I start whining.
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2003 15:54 CDT
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Remember about what I said earlier?? You know about taking a to long....well its that time. Update soon, please.
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Reviewed By: Yoraeryu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2003 10:06 CDT
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Good fic so far. Goth Kagome... No skirts... Definately something I can relate to. ^.^! But... Kagome's not gonna die, right? You wouldn't let her die, would you? Inu-kun's gonna save her, right? RIGHT?!?! o.O; This is a much better fic than my first one. ;.; I'm jealous. @__@ Wanna read it? It's called The Youkai's Plot, by um... some crazed fangirl... I forget the name.... I'm ending it soon anyway, so who cares? ^__^ |
Reviewed By: lysel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2003 14:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please undate |
Reviewed By: MikoKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2003 20:14 CDT
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it's so exciting. What a suspense. Please continue. And I really was surprised with the Inuyasha kissing Kagome think but wow! |
Reviewed By: Rei-Rei On: August 17, 2003 19:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wtf?! does she actually try and kill herself?! damnit! update again soon! i hate cliffies! >.< lol! |
Reviewed By: Rei-Rei On: August 05, 2003 13:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! that sho as hell was hott!! lmao! but when they kissed it was just sploched together...kinda weird but o well it was still iight ^_^ update soon!! |
Reviewed By: Sai-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2003 07:27 CDT
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Sweet fic dude! I love it! i really like Kagome being a goth, even tho it's a i/k fic it's pretty cool. ^_____^ u have to update soon! absolutely soon!
Purple |
Reviewed By: Inuheart On: August 05, 2003 00:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a cool fic! I cant really see Kagome as a gothic...^_^ I cant wait to see how it turns out!Please update! |
Reviewed By: Rei-Rei On: July 30, 2003 23:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like this fic alot. its really unique. Kagomes never been a weird goth b4 and its really cool to see her opposite of wut she is in tha anime. update soon!!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: tsukino On: July 30, 2003 21:15 CDT
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write more!
(no more words needed) |
Reviewed By: bise b On: July 30, 2003 14:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
good fic i like it, but the chapters are too short. but besides that its really good. bye |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2003 21:36 CDT
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Kagome goth. Well that is definatly original. This could definatly be a good fan fic.
Don't be shy that this is your first fan fic. When you tell everyone up front we won't be as demanding for updates. But don't go thinking you won't get any threats if you take to long.
I honestly thought that the make out scene wasn't abrupt. But to cover it you can put in a scene of InuYasha thinking to himself. That will let us know the unknown reason behind his lip exercise. And having a scene with Kagome reflecting on it might be good to. But you probably planned to do that all ready.
Anyway, I can't wait to see what happens nexts! Be waiting for your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: MikoKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2003 15:24 CDT
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That was a really good fanfic please keep writing |
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