"Petals & Thorns" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: HD On: August 01, 2004 20:15 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: you judt have to update it :)
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Title: ooh. Reviewed By: nezumi-san On: August 01, 2004 01:50 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: ooh, tht was a nice story... however i'm not a fan of dark fics either... it was great, but currently i'm obsessed with Akitoxtohru stories... i only gave a nine cuz i just can't see Akito that way... he is mean, but he isn't that sick... i can't explain wht i mean, but it just seems like u made him the total bad guy hoo duz evil just for his own sick pleasure... but i dun see him that way... itz a great story, and i dunno specifically which fans would love this story more since... it's a Hariru fic, but it mostly features Akiru stuff... but overall itz great for the regular Furuba fan... keep writing! :::::konneko-san:::::
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Reviewed By: Lady Battousai [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 21:34 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: hey!! i really LOVED reading ur story!! god dammit Atiko is such an ass...a horrible sick perverted son of a bitch!! he really makes in sick...well in this story n.e.wayz lmao hehe n.e.wayz i am just happy that i got to read ur story with i LOVED (i already said that) created by a person who has A LOT of talent!! i am goin' to see if u have any more storys byez *kiss*
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Reviewed By: animegirl411 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 07:06 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Reviewed By: shadowslayerprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2004 18:05 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10 Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review: It...was okay...i liked it...a little, i don't really like dark fics too much.
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Reviewed By: Moonlights_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2003 14:58 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Is it ok that i skipped the lemon parts?
its a great story, though!
it is sad, but happy...argh...i cant find words to describe it...*sigh*
i like it.
alot.
could you make a sequil?
like 5 years later, where the child is born and it describes their life,
i still have some holes that need to be filled...
like, are they still cursed?
what about kyou and kagura, it would be cool if they got married, and yuki and...um...i dont know...and kisa hiro! they could get married at 20
or whatever...*g*
that would be cool.
please make a sequel!
love,
Moonlights_Dragon
ps. email with your aswers at Moonlights_Dragon@yahoo.com
tnx! |
Reviewed By: baka_neko On: July 30, 2003 23:24 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Your story is very origional and creative. I enjoyed it a lot. Keep up the good work!!! |