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Reviewed By: Maruken On: March 19, 2004 21:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tom and Oldie Warts , wat's THEIR story? And how will Tom and Bakura react to each other?
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2004 14:02 CST
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*is sugar hish of diet coke (cause that's all my parents buy)* hiIrellyliketheficitisreallygoodupdatesoonthoughtIknowabouthomworktroublesI havethemtoo.
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Title: I love it!
Reviewed By: Kris1rad [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2004 17:15 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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The story now gets funny! I love the funnyness! MYAH! HA! HA! HA! Weeeeeeeee!!!! *Goes Nuts* Mian (Kristen's Yami): "Yes, it's very funny. Looks like Kristen ahs gotten into the Grape Soda again, too much of it. Uh oh!
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Reviewed By: Kris1rad [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2004 17:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is pretty interesting except that you messed up one thing... Severus Snape is 1 of the good guys! He even says it in the 4th book, The Goblet of Fire!
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl On: February 05, 2004 18:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, my fav TV show and book series in one! Yeah! What a wonderful fic! AND DON'T LET ANYONE TAKE MY RYOU! Please update soon, all the good fics are never updated! I love this fic, and I tend to give up on the ones that aren't updated, so UPDATE or else... PS this is not meant to be a flame...
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Reviewed By: Shinigami24 On: January 31, 2004 07:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*LOL* U realize when Tohma and Seth show up things are gonna get interesting! Especially when Harry meets up with Tom! But, I really wanna hear Tom's story! He better have a good explaination for Voldie and the diary incident! *snicker* Poor Isis! She's gonna have her hands full with 7 yamis!- Yami, Bakura, Ishtar, Damian, Helios, Tohma and Seth! Cuz Seth and Tohma are bound to be on Yami's side too... *ROFLMAO* I feel sorry for Harry, Draco, Seto and Tom, cuz now they might get dragged in the feud, when they become friends with Malik and Ryo... Luckily for Harry and Draco their yamis get along! Oh by thwe way, pls have the yamis find otu abotu the Marauder's Map, and introduce them to Gred and Forge! I SO want to see them play a prank on Snape and the other Slytherins! And maybe ARon too, if he tries to give Harry a hard time!
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Title: u go girl
Reviewed By: coolchic On: January 21, 2004 13:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Robin Well I read the story it is very gud were did u come up with ur ideas and is the 4 items real or did u make them up I like how u have used harry potter and yu-gi-ou together so continue the story but make it a bit more exciting and make it fast i want to no wat happens next lol good firdt fic i liked it alot _ _ o ... wow
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Title: u go girl
Reviewed By: coolchic On: January 21, 2004 13:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey robin well
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Reviewed By: InsaneAuthoress [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2004 18:37 CST
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Reem: looking good ^_~! I definatly like Tom fighting against his older odd demented self! OOOOH IS TOM GONNA CHANGE HIS LIFE NOW SO VOLDMORT NEVER EXISTED!? Remasi:... okay as she was saying before she blew up please update and let the story continue!
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Reviewed By: CandyCandy On: January 02, 2004 10:25 CST
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Hi! I was wunderin if u r gunna update? this is a good story. Please rite more!
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Title: AWESUM!
Reviewed By: SailorStarCosmos [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2003 08:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story/fanfic. It's reely good. I hope u update soon!
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Reviewed By: Kurama Fluffy Lover On: December 12, 2003 18:33 CST
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This is really good please wright more soon. oh can I make a guess on who the other two mp are. well here are my guesses....Hermione& Ron. and remeber please wright more soon. Kurama Fluffy Lover
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Reviewed By: Nakerti On: November 16, 2003 15:31 CST
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UPDATE!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Samantha J.C On: November 16, 2003 01:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good for your first fanfic! although you kind of need to work on useage,spelling and puntiation, but no biggie! anyway I love your idea please write the next chapters soon!
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Title: fun fun
Reviewed By: kurama lover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2003 20:04 CST
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this was a fun fanfic and i really enjoyed this, please continue
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