| "Truth's Tears" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
| Pages (3): [ « < 1 2 3 ] |
Title: Another Chapter!!
Reviewed By: MiraiXenia18 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2003 01:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Strange....I logged in, but when I go to the review page I'm not. @_@ Anywho....Great Chapter!! I know I haven't reviewed in a while. Gomen Nasai Lillithan-chan. But I'm reviewing now, isn't that all that counts? ::glances at two very angry red eyes that belong to lillithan:: ::gulp:: I'll try... ::A low growl is heard:: I mean! I WON'T ever forget again. ::the red recedes:: ::sighs in relief:: Ok...Um, great chapter!! So Nuraku is possessing Kagome's body through the miasma to kill Inu Yasha so that in turn her friend will kill her. I wonder why Nuraku wants Miroku and Sango to kill Kagome..... Is it because he just derives sick pleasure from that sort of situation, which certainly, if that's the purpose he does anyway Or..... Will having Kagome killed by the people she cares most about and her killing the man she loves corrupt the power of the Jewel so that it becomes tainted by evil? After all that was the reason be placed Kikyo and Inu Yasha against each other, ne? I mean besides the whole jealousy issue, didn't he do that to corrupt the Jewel's power? But then Kikyo died and took the Jewel with her so it remained pure.... ::scratches head thoughtfully:: Maybe, I'm thinking to much into this... Yeah, why don't I just wait for your next chapter. ^_^ After all, nothing I come up with will come even close to what you have in mind no doubt. Yet, I also wonder what Kikyo meant in the last chapter when she said, "I will only say that now I understand what I was unable to before." Yeah, that was slightly enigmatic. But I won't bore you with my theories again. God knows this review is long enough and far boring enough for me to add that to it now. Loving the story and I hope you update before February. Ya see I like to give ya a wide window of time, since I know what its like to have a life outside fanfiction. However any long than that and... ::glances around tentatively:: I won't be liable for my actions. ::evil cackle ensues:: If I write out that sound…yeah lets say I haven't had enough caffeine or sugar to make myself go insane...YET... ^_^
|
Title: Hello
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2003 23:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hello! WOW...good chapter! i LOOOOVE this fic lots! so wonderfully angsty! i got like two main angst fics that i walways wait for themt o be updated, and your one of them! good chapter! poor Kagome...oh my! i wondeer how everything turns out...T-T i feel so bad for Gome! well-this is sooo wonderful so far! i can't wait for you to update again! -Lani
|
Title: Lo
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2003 19:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! wow...this made me cry! it was just so brilliantly put together!!! i was in a bad mood and needed to cry, so i read ur fic n it was GREAT!!! it made me laugh too! the whole Koga thing, where he dies is what made me cry my heart out *i don't know too much about Ayame yet tho...just the basic stuff, she likes koga bala blah blah* and when kagome thought he would say, i laughed so hard! then cried cause i missed him....but good job! and i thought the side story was funny! good job! plz update when its convienent fer you! -Lani btw, congrats to the other author!
|
Title: ....damn
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2003 20:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
*stares wide eyed at authors* damn...wow I'm in shock...this story is damn good *strogles not to cry in front of roomates* I can't wait for more...and I'm all so going to read whatever else you all have written *under the midiaminer site's name* ;) |
Reviewed By: LilithQueen On: September 11, 2003 00:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fan fic is great;it illustrates how love often is in the real world.Just to let you know an intersting tidbit here;it is impossible for A human consciousness(miko or not) to occupy more than one physical body in our dimension and to be aware of it all at the same time; only the Supreme Goddess/God is able to do that because they are the ultimate consciosness.And human beings can remember their past lives;there have been similiar situations like Inuyasha/Kagome in our world(with both being reincarnated).Yes,there are other free will peoples (besides humans) that do love like we do.But A person HAS to be very careful.Anyway,I know that's alot of information but it's true; I've studied this and experimented with this for many years. I'm sure Rumiko Takahashi isn't aware of it,but I thought it would be intersting to share. Thanks! You're a great writer. |
Reviewed By: waterrain [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2003 22:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's ok and a little sad and funny and cool please oh *puppy dogs eye's* write some more chapters please and update soon please *puppy dogs eye's* please. |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2003 20:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
I guess I should add that I *know* Kagome won't chase after Inuyasha anymore. Well, I'm assuming she won't. But that doesn't really matter at the moment, since she is in the hands of Naraku, victim to the demon and his possession of the complete Shikon. You know, that could really cause some problems in feudal Japan. Sadistic former human with magic ball seeks to gain ultimate power...or something... I think I should have stayed away from the review box...you're going to start throwing rotten tomatoes at me any mome- *ducks* |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2003 20:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
My fogged mind registered a tense error...I think...or was that something I did earlier... I'm really not all 'here' right now, but when I read I review...regardless of what might spill forth from my fingers. Ah, more angst! And Miroku! *waits* Yes, Miroku! I'm so glad that mm.org has fixed the email updates bug...now I can be sure not to miss new chapters ^^ I really like the fact that Inuyasha is not giving up on his promise to Kikyou, nor has he denied his feelings for Kagome. Of course, that combination has screwed him over royally as far as his relationship with Kagome goes...then again, she might suck it up and get over it like she always seems to do. "Oh Inuyasha, I want to be with you forever and ever, no matter what you do." Okay. I think I'll step calmly away from the review box and stop rambling ^^ |
Reviewed By: VioletRose [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2003 13:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was a good chapter, i think u wrote it well. cant believe kouga died.... its so sad... damnit to hell the fact that he acutally has to go to hell with her... but i cant help but wonder who kagome really ends up with... i got a good guess but itd be a happy ending... |
Title: ch 4
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 1969 18:00 CST
Comment/Review:
Nice work ^^ I don't think the lemon was too early...after all, Kagome has already been waiting what, 3 years, for him? Although, the fairy tale seldom lasts...as I'm sure will be the case with this, from the overall feeling I have with this fic.
I loved the scene with Miroku...very cute. Poor guy!
Keep up the great work ^^ |
Reviewed By: waterdruid [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2003 12:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am a huge fan of angsty, depressing darkfics. You can imagine my joy when you described the upcoming chapters. I love the beginning, and can't wait for more updates. |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 20:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think it's more fun when you're not sure where you're going with a fic...that's how I write ^^
Of course, fun is an odd word to use with sad fics. Chapter 2, another good one. A great display of Naraku's methods. I'm really too tired to put together coherent sentences tonight ^^ |
Reviewed By: VioletRose [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 17:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
eh makes sense, not like he could of just gone to the mall. nooo... effin naraku.... its so effin sad... |
Reviewed By: VioletRose [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 13:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
aawwwww... that was so sweet of him... baka! kikyos dead already... =( i guess ill go get the chocolate for the next chapters... update soon! |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 09:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like this very much. Then again, I am a sucker for the depressing fics that most people won't write! I look forward to the rest; though I do not know what direction this is going, I am sure I will enjoy it...this first chapter tells me that. |
| Pages (3): [ « < 1 2 3 ] |
