| "Truth's Tears" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2003 20:34 CDT
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I guess I should add that I *know* Kagome won't chase after Inuyasha anymore. Well, I'm assuming she won't. But that doesn't really matter at the moment, since she is in the hands of Naraku, victim to the demon and his possession of the complete Shikon. You know, that could really cause some problems in feudal Japan. Sadistic former human with magic ball seeks to gain ultimate power...or something... I think I should have stayed away from the review box...you're going to start throwing rotten tomatoes at me any mome- *ducks* |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2003 20:29 CDT
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My fogged mind registered a tense error...I think...or was that something I did earlier... I'm really not all 'here' right now, but when I read I review...regardless of what might spill forth from my fingers. Ah, more angst! And Miroku! *waits* Yes, Miroku! I'm so glad that mm.org has fixed the email updates bug...now I can be sure not to miss new chapters ^^ I really like the fact that Inuyasha is not giving up on his promise to Kikyou, nor has he denied his feelings for Kagome. Of course, that combination has screwed him over royally as far as his relationship with Kagome goes...then again, she might suck it up and get over it like she always seems to do. "Oh Inuyasha, I want to be with you forever and ever, no matter what you do." Okay. I think I'll step calmly away from the review box and stop rambling ^^ |
Reviewed By: VioletRose [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2003 13:28 CDT
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that was a good chapter, i think u wrote it well. cant believe kouga died.... its so sad... damnit to hell the fact that he acutally has to go to hell with her... but i cant help but wonder who kagome really ends up with... i got a good guess but itd be a happy ending... |
Title: ch 4
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 1969 18:00 CST
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Nice work ^^ I don't think the lemon was too early...after all, Kagome has already been waiting what, 3 years, for him? Although, the fairy tale seldom lasts...as I'm sure will be the case with this, from the overall feeling I have with this fic.
I loved the scene with Miroku...very cute. Poor guy!
Keep up the great work ^^ |
Reviewed By: waterdruid [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2003 12:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am a huge fan of angsty, depressing darkfics. You can imagine my joy when you described the upcoming chapters. I love the beginning, and can't wait for more updates. |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 20:55 CDT
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I think it's more fun when you're not sure where you're going with a fic...that's how I write ^^
Of course, fun is an odd word to use with sad fics. Chapter 2, another good one. A great display of Naraku's methods. I'm really too tired to put together coherent sentences tonight ^^ |
Reviewed By: VioletRose [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 17:36 CDT
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eh makes sense, not like he could of just gone to the mall. nooo... effin naraku.... its so effin sad... |
Reviewed By: VioletRose [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 13:10 CDT
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aawwwww... that was so sweet of him... baka! kikyos dead already... =( i guess ill go get the chocolate for the next chapters... update soon! |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 09:39 CDT
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I like this very much. Then again, I am a sucker for the depressing fics that most people won't write! I look forward to the rest; though I do not know what direction this is going, I am sure I will enjoy it...this first chapter tells me that. |
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