| "The Needed Journey" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] |
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Title: Lo
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 00:37 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hiyee! YAY! good job! im soooo sorry i havent reviewed yet, i was reading ur story for some time, just kept getting distracted! amn skul! and i would love to lend u my muse, but i think i overworked her....im sorry...shes a bit paranoind now n dont noe wut she talking about! eep! wellllllllll, GOOD JOB!!!!! very very very creative and well, i liked the lemon! it was good...and the tail thing! never thought of that! perfect! oooh...n i noe wut ya mean bout the papers thing....damn drrama...im sorry *huggles* i hope that you will have enough time to finish all your school work, just take your time....i noe wut its like-so just take as much time as ya need...its all good! but-keep up the good work okay! -Lani
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Title: on behalf of me?? @_@
Reviewed By: caliko (not signed in) On: November 02, 2003 17:16 CST
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***blush*** Glad to help,only don't hit me when you get frustrated.. TEHEHEHEHEH... ^_^ Looking forward to seeing your rewrites! Um.. can you email them to me? I sorta lose track of fics lately. ***BIG BLUSH*** blame it on my teachers at college...^_^ Anywho, HURRY WITH THE NEXT CHAPPY! (i'm greedy) Caliko
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Title: Ithilelda
Reviewed By: Ithilelda [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2003 12:57 CST
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hey i know that i'm a bit demanding but ...........UPDATE NOW!!!!!
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Title: To reviewers
Reviewed By: Sundragon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2003 20:35 CST
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I love that you have reviewed. I hope I continue to please you. To Caliko- I tried to email you but there seems to be a problem. It was sent back. Thanks! Love you all! Hasta!
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Reviewed By: neko-mata On: October 27, 2003 17:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a really cool fic .Im a big fan of sess/kag pairings.i also love haveing kagome as a demon,its cool.keep it up but try for a little more dialog in futer chapters
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Reviewed By: Caliko (not signed in) On: October 27, 2003 08:40 CST
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alright, i'm reviewing. I wanted to get a better feel for your style before I reviewed. The story is good, and your writing isn't that bad. The only problem I can see is that you rush way too much. I understand that you wanted to get the main ideas plotted out, but what you posted is only a skeletan. You need to add more muscle and flesh to this thing, k? I repeat, it's NOT BAD,but it could be much better. cut your chapters in half, and rewrite them with more description, more realistic dialouge, ect. don't post unless you have at least 5 pages, and slow down the entire fic. I recognise a lot of the ideas from other fics, and this isn't bad... but if you are going to write your own version of 'what if', then you should do justice to the story by making it as good or better than the fic you got the idea from. You might also want to add a note in your author notes crediting the idea to the original story you got it from, and provide a link. I know it's hard to rewrite a fic, trust me. I've done it before. It's agonizing and annoying when you just don't want to see the darn chapter in your word program again. But, writing fanfiction is a training ground for writing original works, especially when you have the talent to write. (And you do have that talent,you just haven't trained yourself yet.) Don't be lazy, k? And email me the rewrites so i can read. Bebop_baby@yahoo.com
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Title: your review
Reviewed By: jeannie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2003 07:37 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is pretty good, and I'm enjoying it, but your storyline isn't very smooth, you keep jumping around, which can make it kind of confusing for the readers. You also don't have very much detail. But I can understand not having very much time to really make a story into exactly what is in your mind. Damn words just don't make it easy. But it is a VERY good story, and I'm looking forward to the ending and/or any sequels that you may write.
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Reviewed By: ithilelda On: October 19, 2003 17:41 CDT
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hey, whats up? It's been a while since youve updated. getting a little worried. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Ithilelda On: September 22, 2003 18:00 CDT
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love the new chap!!! I can't wait for the next one! (p.s. no apologies needed.)
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Title: Great story.
Reviewed By: Missy-Bee On: September 07, 2003 01:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I enjoyed your fic very much and I hope you update soon. However I wish you would space out your spoken lines and thoughts out more. I myself keep getting confused not knowing who is speaking and who isn't. Though everything else minus a few spelling and grammar mistakes was really well written. Oh this is my ff.net name you can try to look me up on there. Yeah I know their are a lot of snitches on FF net as of late. I hope they get a real bad flu or something so they can stay in bed and not tell on people. perhaps I should write a one-shot about it.... (sighs) Oh well. Bye. |
Reviewed By: Ithilelda On: August 30, 2003 19:23 CDT
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I love this fic! I am kinda addicted now so please update as often as possible. |
Reviewed By: Honakett On: August 19, 2003 22:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed what I have read so far. It has been very creative and I agree Shippo does need a family. When you bring Inuyasha back are you going to find him his own soul mate. He needs someone just not Kagome. P.S. LEMON |
Reviewed By: black canary On: August 19, 2003 02:35 CDT
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interesting. can't wait for the next chapter. so update soon. |
Reviewed By: Stephanie On: August 04, 2003 04:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic and i am kinda mad because you only have three chapters up but any way I LOVE THIS FIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: bise b On: August 03, 2003 23:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good good but i personally think that the chapters are too short but i also love long chapters. well bye |
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