| "A Stronger, Wiser Kagome" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2003 07:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great update ^^ I don't know who I feel the most sorry for...Kagome, Sango, or Miroku. I have a feeling that things will be interesting for the three of them. Having Miroku witness the exchange with Sango was a nice touch...poor guy. |
Reviewed By: Eartha [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2003 17:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well...this was a really good songfic. You weaved your story beautifully around the lyrics of the song. The only problem I have with it is that it was really, really OOC. I just can't see Inuyasha doing that. But then, that's my view of the anime. Anyways, great job, keep it up. |
Reviewed By: lysel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2003 19:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2003 08:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this ^^ The way you've created their personalities for this...Inuyasha's betrayal after so many years...Sesshoumaru now possessing the Tetsusaiga... I'm not one who cares if a character is in character or out of character, so long as it's well done ^^ |
Reviewed By: SUNSTAR On: August 06, 2003 22:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS A GOOD STORY SO FAR!!UPDATE AGAIN SOON!SESS/KAG PLEASE AND DONT FORGET THE LEMONY GOODNESS!!
JA NE! |
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