| "The New Student and Kagome's Secret" Reviews/Comments [ 1030 ] |
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Title: this is the real thing
Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2003 06:20 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the other one i did on the 9th i wrote cause i was being rushed by my dad,so here is the real thing:omg really great chapter i hope Inu wins cause he is really the only one who desreves Kagome!!!!!!!!!!!!can't wait till u up-date!!!!!!!!!!!!now 4 my lil smiley i always do:^_^
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2003 01:42 CST
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I really hope you get a chance to update soon, because I really can't wait to see what is going to happen during this challenge. I really love this story!!!
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2003 20:51 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really good chapter can't wait till yur next up-date
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Reviewed By: animechik89 On: December 09, 2003 18:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG i love your fanfic!!!!! Please update as soon as possible and the next chapter would be perfect for inuyasha and kagome to express their true feelings officaly. i love it when inuyasha gets all protective over kagome. i no there are EOCs to study for but please please update!!!!! Keep it up!!!! animechik
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Reviewed By: Jakkapa On: December 09, 2003 16:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good... GOOD!! Very very awesome! This has a place in my top 3 list! The top list has names such "Camp Shikon" and "Like Father like son" And this is now added to that! Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: sesshy_my_sex_god [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2003 15:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked the peice. I just finished. One problem I found was the fact that you seem to use the phrase "he's never been so open with me before" or something really close to that way too often. It seems every other minute you're using it and after a while it seems to lose it's meaning. But over all I like the story. Keep up the fic I like it -sesshy my sex god
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Reviewed By: BabayBunny [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2003 15:56 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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...*looks at u* Im not going to say anything bacause i know you would rather inu live then kouga...*glares* How could you end it there!!!*falls on floor with anime tear* PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SO I CAN SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!
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Reviewed By: Relix On: December 09, 2003 15:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep Writing! I LOVE YOU!!!
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Title: AWWWW!!!!
Reviewed By: Sume On: December 09, 2003 14:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWWWWW!!!!!!! GO INUYASHA! Yea boy you fight for your Kagome! Awwww, that chapter was sooo sweet and soo good with such an evil cliffy! But that's okay! And I even downloaded Kagome and Inuyasha's song, and played it while I was reading, your right....it gives it such a good mood! It's like....dun dun dun...who will win Kagome?! Dun dun dun!!!!!! OMG! I love this story! Please update whenever you get a chance! Sume
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Reviewed By: Esther Tan On: December 09, 2003 08:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Argh!!!! That Kouga !! So dense!!! I gotta kick his butt. Go Inuyasha kick his butt to the moon!!. If I have a Kouga doll I'll stick pins into it & watch him squirm. Quick next chapter I want Inuyasha to win and Inu & Kag to be together again.Why why must U be so mean (howl out loud). Great story man!!! See even got my emotion to feel the intense anger against Kouga. Please update quick quick.
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko(Not signed in) On: December 09, 2003 07:54 CST
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w00t! for the first time when somebody said "play [insert song]" i actually had it!!! =D oh man kagome's spazin' out! DOH!!!! DONT LET INUYASHA DIE, DO U HEAR ME!?!?!!?!?!?!
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Reviewed By: Priestess Kylie-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2003 23:39 CST
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Reviewed By: Katina108 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2003 21:44 CST
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Really great chapter! I think it's your best chapter by far!! I can't wait to see what happens! Does school end this week for you too? I hope it does! That means more updates!
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Reviewed By: IWantMoreIY On: December 08, 2003 21:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry the scale only goes up to 10 of 10. I would really rather give a 15 or 16 of 10, but oh well. The spelling thing is just for "in do time, in do time"(should be due) in a pervious chapter(I don't remeber which and I don't care). I LOVE THIS STORY. Lately I can't get enough Inuyasha and this has done wonders for my hunger. Please write more! I love how you have managed to keep the major players having essentially similar interactions while keeping it all plausible! But some things need to be done: *throws small tomato at author for the cliffhangers and intentionally misses because its just too darn good a story* I don't know if I'll ever be able to read another less-than-excellent fanfic again, but I'll forgive you if you keep writing... keep up the superlative work!
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Reviewed By: Kaye [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2003 21:04 CST
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What was that you were saying about evil cliffhangers? I think this takes the freaking cake! You must write more soon, please. Keep it up! It's excellent, and don't let either of them die, and if one must die let it be Kouga. I love him but killing Inuyasha would not be cool.
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