| "Watch Over Me" Reviews/Comments [ 112 ] |
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Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 00:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Takes a deep breath* LMAO!!!!! OMFG! LMAO!! LOL!!!! I was reading all nicley...and I get to this part The dancer ripped off the veil and it was……………… ANZU! My eyes widened, and I seriously almost felloff my chair in laughter! Lol, poor, poor things...That must've bee soooo gross. Ewww, Anzu stripping *Shivers* Anyway, I'm glad she's getting better ^_^ *Waves and holds up a 'get well soon' card*
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Reviewed By: *Elizabeth*Marie*Rose* [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2003 20:34 CST
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Anzu naked is the most frightening thing that could ever have happened... *dies* But the rest with the chibis was really cute... Keep up the good work!
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Title: *horrifeid yet not*
Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2003 20:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
font colorAHHHHH!! As always I got to read this on the bus and I nearly had a heartattack! lol i was so thinking it was like mariks wife recieranated in some way and then it was Anzu, i felt Seto's pain, that was so wrong but it it was sooo funny! But then it was like he hated my body! But it wasnt he hated Anzu who was trying to rape him, noooo!!!! Butyeah that was so funny I swear to Ra! *feels speical for saying that* And it was so cute everyone ran away but i would think there'd be a male stripper, anyway I would have to say that was a nice touch to add that in htere! Still cant wait until the wedding! Yippy skippy!!!!!@!!!!
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Reviewed By: Joeys_Gal 2 lazy 2 login On: November 07, 2003 18:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol that chapter was sooooo funny!! i can't believe Anzu was the dancer!!!! I really hope that Hayden starts being a normal child around his new parents, he seems pretty distraught! I hope your wife is feeling better (don't mind me asking but are you guys really married/lesbians?) no offence!! ^_^ man i hope that baddie that you bring back isn't Steven! I hated him soooo much!! Aten is adorable but Aria needs some anger management!! Great story keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: Bwuebewwy Sugar Pwincess On: November 07, 2003 18:01 CST
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AHHHHHHHH!!!!NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!EWWWWWWWWW, ANZU IS NASTY!!! MY EYES, THEY BURN, EVEN FROM JUST READING!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH *breaks off into sobs* make it stop! make it stop!!! AHHHHHHHH!!!
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Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2003 22:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! *Goes crazy* They're getting married! HOW KAWAII! Now Yami and Yugi have to get married...or adopt a child ^-^
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Reviewed By: The Mystical Dragon On: November 06, 2003 10:06 CST
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Wow... Beautiful way to pop the question... :::: Takes the four plushies she bought for her niece and nephew. She gives the purple one with pink ears/feet to Aria, the green one with white ears/feet and gives it to Aten, and the white one with red ears/feet and gives it to Hayden.::: Make sure you dont mess them up.. They are really for my niece and nephew.. but the white one is for a special friend of mine.
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Reviewed By: *Elizabeth*Marie*Rose* [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2003 22:43 CST
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KAWAII! That was just the most wonderful thing I've ever read! Keep up the amazing, wonderful work!
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Title: ^____________^
Reviewed By: Joeys_Gal can't login too hard lol ^_^ On: November 05, 2003 19:25 CST
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OOOH that was such a sweet chapter!!! Aten proposing for Marik hehehe what a cute idea! I can't wait to see what the bachelor party will be like. You'll have to make Bakura and Marik do something funny in it!! ^___^ great story keep it up!
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Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2003 19:13 CST
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That was so sweet! Sweet and awesome to the max I swear! It was about time, I liked your jealous Aria going on there and the male bonding moment, looks like Hayden wont be so alone anymore things looking up! Planning to have the same wedding as Ryou adn Bakura did and will Yami *hiss* be the preist figure??so happy just two more days! SCORE! A naughty bachol party ahead! Anyway to sum it up it was sweet as the pie im eating right now, good-o!!!!
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Reviewed By: Bwuebewwy Sugar Pwincess On: November 05, 2003 18:49 CST
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Stwabewwy Cotton Candy was good... but Bwuebewwy Sugar Pwincess is better^^ anywho... Aria reminds me so much of Bakura...only chibi.... and more feminen. Great chappie^^ *looks over at her halloween candy* ORO!!!^^ Candy!!!
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Title: Libido Finsihing love!
Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2003 21:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yeah! Now im up to date with your fics and I so want more! And I have to say reading this ont he bus in the mornign was cool, and the bloodlsut was wayyy intense!And I was so sad though ti was so wrong that Hyden had to be exposed liek that no privacy at all! It was so wrong...anyway I was thinking of soemthing I wanted to comment on...OH EAYH! If i didnt say it before ill say it again, the talk Marik had to ive was hysterical serious to the max. And hints on whats to come in the sequel are you palnning to like make it jump ahead some few years to them being teenagers or are you planning to take it one step at a time? Will there be any kawii moments ahead for Hyden to get better *puppy dog eyes* PLEASE ! They can have a big cold BBQ in the backyard with the swimming poool! Yay! *jumps in* AHH COLD!1 ARE THOSE PARANNAS?!!!*sees fish licking their teeth. O.o RUN AWAY!!! GOOD STUFF AUTHORESS KEEP IT UP!!! *gives hugs to all the fish and they turn to dust* Oh yeah...im a hugging fiend. OH YEAH and nice use of libido..i think i said that before too because its in a Nirvana song and I just love the sound and meaning to the word, thank you and goodnight*bows and walks away*
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Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2003 22:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow extreme coolness to the max! It was so mysterious and whatnot, I was loving it, everything al the small things you mentioned way long ago came back to me and I felt specail because I paid attention to it. *prays dont let anyone die!* funny..aria...seto...eep!!! good stuff though ^_^
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Title: awww
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2003 14:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww poor Hayden. take the chibi and hug him. great chapter
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Reviewed By: Stwabewwy Cotton Candy On: November 01, 2003 11:25 CST
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awwwww, chibis are so cute^^ guess what tho? I'm moving... all weekend >< I hate moving, and try to aviod it but my roomieis bitchin at me for not cleaning it so that the landlord will be happy. Keep up the good work ^^
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Reviewed By: Crazy-kins [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2003 11:06 CST
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Aw... poor Hayden. I hope he losens up to his new parents. Such a kewt chappie! When do you get the time to write these?
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Title: Hi!
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2003 23:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww, I hope you'll both be ok. Though I don't know you in real life, it feel's like I've gotten to know you through emails, and stories. Hope you'll both do ok *Hugs both* Great chapter by the way ^_^ Happy Halloween!
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Reviewed By: Keiko Misstress of Destruction On: October 29, 2003 17:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohayoo! I didn't start reading this series until just before Watch Over Me, and I really likes it! But, I was wondering if there will ever be a possibility of a Bakura/Malik lemon... or are they not close like that? Luv the Ryou/Bakura, Bakura/Marik, Ryou/Marik, Ryou/Malik, Malik/Marik pairings ^0^ keep writing, cuz this is the only thing on mediaminer that I read
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Reviewed By: Stwabewwy Cotton Candy On: October 29, 2003 16:27 CST
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O.O WOOOHOOOOO!!!!! NOT MORE STEVEN JUST DEAD, BUT STEVEN TORTURE AS WELL!!! YESYESYESYESYES!!!! *bounces up and down and giggles endlessly* omg, that was the funniest thing i every read, tho. so f*ckin funnny.... omg, you are the best!
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Reviewed By: The Mystical Dragon On: October 27, 2003 13:47 CST
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::: Once Again, she takes her Bunny plushie and her Ryo-Ohki plushie and tucks Bunny into bed with Aria, and Ryo-Ohki in with Aten::: Sweet dreams, sweeties.
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Reviewed By: The Mystical Dragon On: October 27, 2003 12:46 CST
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BWAAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh My!!!! The BIG questions already... OH BTW--- I got to see my neice and nephew this weekend... two very kawaii chibis!
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Title: Hiya!
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2003 19:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Mommy Malik, I don't have my penis anymore!" Aria cried from the bathroom. *Falls off chair and bursts out laughing* LMAO! OMG! That was so funny ^_____^ Sorry I don't revew as much, bu I have a job, drum lessons and skool, and it's time consuming, but I still read/love your fic! And I'll never stop reading, because your super awesome! Hope you feel ok Dragondreamer!(That's her name right)
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Title: hehehe
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2003 19:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehehe. Jeez I'm going to hate the day when I have kids and they ask that. that going to be my lovers job. haha. great chapter can't wait for the next chapter. go to help Marik dig up Steven grave and rip the body a part. and run it over with a car. and they wonder why I love the Yami's of Yu-gi-oh. I'm just as evil. grin slighlty
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Reviewed By: Stwabewwy Cotton Candy On: October 22, 2003 19:27 CDT
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awwwwwwww, man BG, you have such a way with lemons...it;s not even funny. Guess what my friend got me? a naked Duo poster!! YAY^^ DUO ^^ *looks up and drools* jhehehhe *hands you a naked 1x2 plushie and a naked BakuraxMarik plushie* hehehe^^
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Reviewed By: The Mystical Dragon On: October 22, 2003 12:31 CDT
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WOW!!!! Aria!!! don't hurt her in your search for M & M's :: Aria looks up and sees a fresh bag of candy flying and landing a safe distance from the authress :: There go get those... and don't wake Aten!! To Bakurasgirl- You would write a hotter than hot lemon while I am still holding this child...
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Reviewed By: The Mystical Dragon On: October 20, 2003 10:20 CDT
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:: Finishes humming 'Itsumo Nando Demo' to Aten, carefully brushing back the sleeping Chibi's hair from his face:: Girl, YOU are LUCKY I have a chibi in my lap!! :: Grins ands holds up a bag of M & M's, pouring the bag over Authress and laughs as Aria leaps on her in pursuit of the M's ::
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Reviewed By: Stwabewwy Cotton Candy On: October 19, 2003 12:45 CDT
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I forgot to tell you! STEVEN IS THE BIGGEST BADDIE I EVER SAW!!!! and if he comes back, KICK HIS ASS BIGTIME!!!!!!! MAJOR-NON-STOP-ASS-KICKING-FOR-STEVEN day!!!!
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Reviewed By: Stwabewwy Cotton Candy On: October 19, 2003 12:36 CDT
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Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!
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Title: not logged in too lazy
Reviewed By: Joeys_Gal On: October 18, 2003 19:00 CDT
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Hey this story is so awesome, I can't wait to see what happens to Aria and Aten.... NOOO don't kill the chibis! You wouldn't!!!!!!! Oh and to answer your question, I think STEVEN and TOM are the biggest baddies in your fic!!! they are real bastards!!!!! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: yasha On: October 18, 2003 12:26 CDT
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i luv this story!!!!! one of the best yet!!!!!!!
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