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Title: hehehe
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2003 19:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehehe. Jeez I'm going to hate the day when I have kids and they ask that. that going to be my lovers job. haha. great chapter can't wait for the next chapter. go to help Marik dig up Steven grave and rip the body a part. and run it over with a car. and they wonder why I love the Yami's of Yu-gi-oh. I'm just as evil. grin slighlty
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Reviewed By: Stwabewwy Cotton Candy On: October 22, 2003 19:27 CDT
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awwwwwwww, man BG, you have such a way with lemons...it;s not even funny. Guess what my friend got me? a naked Duo poster!! YAY^^ DUO ^^ *looks up and drools* jhehehhe *hands you a naked 1x2 plushie and a naked BakuraxMarik plushie* hehehe^^
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Reviewed By: The Mystical Dragon On: October 22, 2003 12:31 CDT
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WOW!!!! Aria!!! don't hurt her in your search for M & M's :: Aria looks up and sees a fresh bag of candy flying and landing a safe distance from the authress :: There go get those... and don't wake Aten!! To Bakurasgirl- You would write a hotter than hot lemon while I am still holding this child...
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Reviewed By: The Mystical Dragon On: October 20, 2003 10:20 CDT
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:: Finishes humming 'Itsumo Nando Demo' to Aten, carefully brushing back the sleeping Chibi's hair from his face:: Girl, YOU are LUCKY I have a chibi in my lap!! :: Grins ands holds up a bag of M & M's, pouring the bag over Authress and laughs as Aria leaps on her in pursuit of the M's ::
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Reviewed By: Stwabewwy Cotton Candy On: October 19, 2003 12:45 CDT
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I forgot to tell you! STEVEN IS THE BIGGEST BADDIE I EVER SAW!!!! and if he comes back, KICK HIS ASS BIGTIME!!!!!!! MAJOR-NON-STOP-ASS-KICKING-FOR-STEVEN day!!!!
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Reviewed By: Stwabewwy Cotton Candy On: October 19, 2003 12:36 CDT
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Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!
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Title: not logged in too lazy
Reviewed By: Joeys_Gal On: October 18, 2003 19:00 CDT
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Hey this story is so awesome, I can't wait to see what happens to Aria and Aten.... NOOO don't kill the chibis! You wouldn't!!!!!!! Oh and to answer your question, I think STEVEN and TOM are the biggest baddies in your fic!!! they are real bastards!!!!! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: yasha On: October 18, 2003 12:26 CDT
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i luv this story!!!!! one of the best yet!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ssjgoddesschico(Cant login) On: October 18, 2003 00:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter ^_^ I love Aria and Aten, I would cry if you killed them! I'd write a lnger review, but I haven't slept in 2 days, so I'm super tired. No skool or work for me tmr! Yay! I can sleep.
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Reviewed By: sliderkta [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2003 16:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
From sliderkta-- Oh no... Aten & Aria are going to die!!! ;_; Oooo! Aten and Aria plushies! Thank you! Huh? Where did my M&M stash go.... Aria! Is that my... my... vibrator on the f-f-floor!!! ACK!!! Get back here with that, you little tot! LOL! **pounces on the Aria plushie, showering it with sweet kisses** About the Fanfic: It's really good, as usual. It was hilarious to see Yami Malik drooling over Isis.LOL! Poor, poor Isis... How does she deal with him??? I would be freaked out if he did that to me... And I can't believe Isis is being so cold when she fortells the future. Hmmm... I wish could show more emotion. Her cold attitude (in Chap. 24) really ticks me off. It's as if she doesn't really care for the kids. She seems alot like Shaddi... doom, gloom, and coldness. That's how I interpreted it. I can hardly wait til the next chapter! I wanna knows what happens with the "Meanie Lady". By the way, I happen to have my own fanfic here on Mediaminer. It's called "Yami Malik's Revenge!" and I was wondering if you could review it? I would love to know what you think! Talk to ya later! ^_^ --sliderkta
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Reviewed By: Crazy-kins [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 18:07 CDT
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Whoa... Evil Aten and Aria? Sounds like an interesting idea to me. The chibi's facing Yami and Seto... I hope they(Aria and Aten) aren't pure evil. -_+. Yay! A sequal to this story!!! Man three years ago I loved reading, then two years after that I hated it, and now, this year, I like it again because there are actually good things to read. Media Miner has better stories than my school's library.
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Reviewed By: The Mystical Dragon On: October 15, 2003 13:02 CDT
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:: props her Ace Frehley bear plushie, her Ryo-Ohki plushie, and her bunny plushie around Aten:: There you go sweetheart, sleep well.
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Reviewed By: Stwabewwy Cotton Candy On: October 13, 2003 13:04 CDT
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wow....Aria, mischevious little girl, ain't she? Never know what she'll do next, same with Aten. and can only picture Aria and Aten facing Yami... wonder if it's gonna happen. and if it does, wonder who's gonna kill Aria? And if i find out, wonder if you're gonna write an other Sequel for this, and if so, i wonder if i will ever beable to stop asking question?
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2003 18:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yea sorry about not review lately I barely get on anymore and have to read and write. *fall over tired* I've been getting up for school at 5 a.m and not getting home until 3:30 and then run around there to. ugh. then with my lover in a different city I got to drive 45 min. and now that I'm 18 I have to do alot more. my birhtday was sep 30. But hey still able to find time to read your stories. great chapter can't wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Crazy-kins [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2003 07:26 CDT
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Oh.. Wooowww. Now we get to hear all about Aria and Atens past. It's so cool what you can come up with, bakurasgirl. I'm not even close to creativness as you are(is that a word?). I can see why Seto was upset when he heard about him and Aria being together. Rencarnations can be so deceiving...
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