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Reviewed By: Inu's bitch On: August 31, 2003 09:30 CDT Comment/Review: please update soon *likes super cool kagome* |
Reviewed By: Icyblu_neko On: August 24, 2003 22:46 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I gave u all those tens cause the story was really good. Plus, since i hate Kikyo(DIE!...again) wat u did to her was good. I am a really big inu/kag fan so please make it rgeat. So far, i think its perfect. |
Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2003 21:44 CDT Comment/Review: u are on my favorites list...nuff said lol |
Reviewed By: Sumechick15 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2003 11:54 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow another one of your stories I like! Your good at this ya know! Anywayz Kagome should have so hit her! Now she looks like a pussy. She is gonna hit Kikyo though right? Cuz I hate Kikyo! Anywaayz keep writing! Have some new chapters up real soon please! Oh yea and you can email me if ya want at Sumechick15@aol.com well bye!
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2003 23:25 CDT Comment/Review:
Oh my!! I am still laughing as I type at this. This fan fic is definatily going on the favorites list!
Who would have thought that the sassy, fiesty, and sex kitten version of Kagome would be this good? (Except you, of course) I love the way you plainly put free-for-all down between Koga, Sesshomaru, Hojo(and InuYasha). No beating around the bush or hidden plans. Touch gloves and fight clean! *Ding! Ding!* The other thing I like is the way you make Sesshomaru and InuYasha growl at the same time. Every time they did it I caught myself giggling. 'Specially since InuYasha is suppose to be taken.
I don't mind the Kikyo bashing at all, so bash till your heart's is content! I was also greatful for the point of view sections. They definatly put put things in perspective. I am curios as to how you will pick up the next chapter. (since everyone is mad at each other) I mean everyone is mad at Kikyo. Kagome basicly told off all the guys while hinting the InuYasha has a shot at her. And Koga and Sesshomaru are going to try and kill InuYasha for winning a competition that he wasn't even suppose to be in.
This is going to be so good! Hurry and give me the next chapter before I die from the wait!
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2003 23:37 CDT Comment/Review:
Me again. I submitted this before looking it over so if the mistakes are to bad, I'll rewite it and send it to you.
Gomen.
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