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Title: really good
Reviewed By: MonkeyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 13:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a really good fanfic, and super easy to read. Everything flows nicely. I'm enjoying the first 3 chapters very much and look forward to the others. The characters are portrayed perfectly.
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Reviewed By: viciouscallisto On: June 24, 2004 17:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THE NARUTO/SASUKE-KUN PAIRING!! i think this might be my favorite story with that pairing!!!! their relationship is so cute! i love your story. oh and that whole kakashi/sasuke-kun incident wasnt bad either. itachi is such a sadistic bastard. i loved him. will he be coming back? and what about orochimaru-sama!! naruto needs to protect his precious sasuke-kun from horny older men!! poor sakura though. oh well. please write more, i wanna know if sasuke-kun can ever get over what itachi did to him and let naruto take their realationship to the 'next level'. yeah, i'd like to read that. anywho, write more! yay for naruto/sasuke-kun!!
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Reviewed By: Sasuke89 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 00:58 CDT
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This story is really good! I hope you update it soon. Love and Peace! Sasuke:)
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Title: Wonderful
Reviewed By: cdkobasiuk [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 10:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was so good. Even the lemon in the middle. I love what you have done with the characters. I hope you explore Kakashi and Iruka more too. I can't wait to see how Naruto takes care of Sasuke. Excellent writting. I was riveted. cdk
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Reviewed By: cdk On: April 21, 2004 14:03 CDT
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Iactually enjoyed this story a lot. Sure it was nasty and dark but I like how you wrote Sasuke, Naruto and Sakura. I would love to see how things turned out between Naruto and Sasuk afterward. cdk
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Reviewed By: Lady Vicious [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2003 14:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you write more to this because I really liked this story, it was serious in so many ways but still kept true to the hints of humor the original 'Naruto' has. I'd like to read more to see what happens to poor Sasuke and I hope he does kill Itachi.
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