| "The Pain of Pleasure" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: Black Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2004 13:43 CDT
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that was a good one i want more what happens
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Reviewed By: Kristie On: July 26, 2004 15:07 CDT
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OMG that was a reall really really great story i love it you have to update it really soon ok thanks Ja ne. ~Ris~
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Reviewed By: forbidden kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 19:49 CDT
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PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE! tell me what happens!
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Reviewed By: forbidden kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 14:35 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I loved it! You're great! *down on knees* lemon, please, lemon please! i have a story too, called ShadowBlade if anyone wants to read it, i only ask for a review when you're done. You're awsome! i LOVE (times 1000000000000000000) your story. PLEASE do a lemon. And for anyone who's in on the joke, The Essence! yall the Essence!
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Title: Om
Reviewed By: Ominee On: June 02, 2004 00:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Out of all the stories I claimed the best I can only say .........WOW. I have never read such and this story is so promising so write more.
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Reviewed By: ? On: May 03, 2004 20:28 CDT
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Do a lEMON!!!! PLEASE!!!! LEMON!
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Title: Soooooo Cool!! =3
Reviewed By: Faye-Faye [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2003 20:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very very nice!! (And I get to review another one of ur ficcy's!! XD ) It's so awesome!!! The way you put things in words can make me believe that that would actually happen! I love ur stories, so keep it up!
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Reviewed By: LOVER-OF-HIEI [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2003 22:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! Otaku Hoshi at your service! *bows* Woh. Ok, I am glad I finished it! Now I know it does have a good ending! I cried, darn it ^.^ Well, I didn't enjoy it very much until the end, but when it came, the whole thing just went pop! And it came together and I liked it very much ^_^ But until then I didn't really like it so it got a 7... But you are such a good writer! Don't stop writing, please!!! Ok, I think I have read and reviewed all of your stories now... YOu keep putting more on! (heck, I should talk! I just put on another one just now!). The story was well put together and was well writen. Maybe I am just not much for Hiei causing pain for Kurama, it should be pure pleasure ^_^ But thats why this fic is called The Pain Of Pleasure, ne? lol (btw, I think you have great titles for your stories and they all fit them so well). Since I dont really like the whole pain thing, I cant say it got a 9 or 10... It was to sad and... painful... But thats just me! If I look at it from another angle *turns head sideways*, it gets a 10 ^.^ But if I look at it straight up for me it gets an 8. But it was still good! Dont let an 8 get you down! (Anyway its a an 8.5, but I didn't round up... Gomen!) Wonderful ending, I simply loved it ^,^ Bye-Chu! ******Otaku~Hoshi P.S. I know that I probably have more free time then you do, but I have reviewed all your stories you have posted on MM.org and you have only reviewed once for me :(
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Reviewed By: Linkin Fantasy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2003 07:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this story a lot, it felt like I was in the room with them as the camera guy. It sounds weird to say but if I can read a fic like I'm watching a show play out it's no good to me.
I hope you do write longers fics you're gonna be really good at it. :) |
Reviewed By: purplechaos04 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2003 22:06 CDT
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Awesome!!!! That was great! I'm so out of breath right now, hehe. |
Reviewed By: Liadon On: August 20, 2003 03:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! That was hot! I LOVED it! *starts to rasp* Damn heat. . . . . . |
Reviewed By: little one On: August 19, 2003 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! So unique and spicy!! ::squeals and reaches for an inhalor:: This was such a well done fic, I feel so grateful to you. Thank you!! The grammar was excellent, the characters were put in positions I have never seen them in...I cant believe I had such luck to come across this fic! Great job!!!! |
Reviewed By: Conorgirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2003 20:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow, I think this is a fantastic story. I actually started to cry. I love how you have Hiei so innocent of knowing how to treat another lover and Kurama is beautiful and dignified in spite of it. Please write more. |
Reviewed By: Trina On: August 19, 2003 07:06 CDT
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Wow I liked this story. Kurama was so sweet and gentle. I never read a story where Hiei was that rough. But how could it be rape if Kurama asked 4 it still confused. I think u need to think of better titles though there all basically the same. |
Reviewed By: someone On: August 19, 2003 04:23 CDT
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cool story
you'll make a good writer in the future
write about something that is longer though |
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