| "Transformations" Reviews/Comments [ 409 ] |
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Reviewed By: Micrll On: December 11, 2004 22:55 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well chapter 60-63 were a little confusing but after rereading them i now get it. Interesting idea with the Alternate ending. Now to provide my idea for a weapon. Bwahahaha... Fear my Laser satellite based network. With the push of a single button any single person or building can be taken out with single stike. As in death from above to all non-reviewers.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: December 08, 2004 19:57 EST
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Wow...I don't think i can compete with such words of praise... To be honest I really like this ending, in a way I almost wish you eould continue it as a spin off because already it is starting to eveolve into it's own world. I look forwards eagerly to seeing what else you have instore and add my thanks to everyone elses, for writing this and allowing us all the pleasure of reading it. Good luck & best wishes as always, Hououza
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Title: yogurt?
Reviewed By: asgasdgasdg On: December 07, 2004 19:59 EST
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ur losing ur touch, i mean, frozen yogurt? this is worse than the remote controlled hamsters, and i laughed my ass off on that one
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Title: What The?!?!?!?!
Reviewed By: Takura On: November 19, 2004 20:10 EST
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sence when did u turn nice at da end of da chapter???nice story though. :)
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Reviewed By: mz krazy On: November 18, 2004 22:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your fanfic is really good, where did u post the pictures that you drew for the charaters? im not used to being on medaiminer so im sorta lost, i wanna see your drawings!! can you somehow tell me, like on a chapter or something?
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Title: Chapter 63
Reviewed By: Hououza On: November 14, 2004 18:50 EST
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See, I remembered to include the chapter number this time...^_^; That was excellent, seriously. I have realy enjoyed reading this, doubly so as it has been one of the longest, I have read. I can't help but marvel at how you have held a story together for so many chapters, a feat in itself... I look forwards to reading all the alternate endings and I am sure I will enjoy them as much as I have the others. Thank you for sharing this excellent piece of fanfiction with us. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: inu luver 2004 not signed in On: November 13, 2004 03:08 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read your whole fic well what is here so far and I loved it!! I really think it might be my favorite of all time. It is so cool!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Chthonic Haven On: November 08, 2004 21:19 EST
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It's exactly like the lucky ones. really close to it neways. i dont mind it though.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: November 08, 2004 16:42 EST
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Wow! How do you keep track of all those names? That is an incredible feat of organisation. I look forwards to the timeline, hope the move goes well. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: ] . ]
Reviewed By: AngelOfDiamonds~Lia~ On: November 08, 2004 16:27 EST
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HOW DID YOU COME UP WITH ALL THOSE NAMES!?! AOD
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Reviewed By: firelord [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2004 05:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God i love you. You are one of the best writers of all time you have made this a terific story and if i where just starting to read it I would not be abal to stop tell i was finised and thats saying a lot and im probably not the only one you to think that you have done a wonderful job on this story I cant wait untel you are done keep up the fantastic work.
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Title: ^_^ WOW!!!!
Reviewed By: DarkAngel69 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2004 19:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
{writing for chapter 60} that was an awesome story, it was so good...no...perfect!!! ^_^ i just totally loved it!! ^_^ you are an awesome writter
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Title: AWESOME!!!!!
Reviewed By: inuoverlord On: November 03, 2004 16:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YESSS MORE MORE NEED MORE AWESOME E-MAIL ME WHEN/IF YOU MAKE A SEQUEL E-MAIL ME AT IN6UYA6SHA6@AOL.COM!!!! LATER, Erik
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Reviewed By: ChAnDrA16 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2004 01:35 EST
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lemme guess, you've read The Lucky Ones? The whole infertility thing was kinda a given. But on the whole your story is really great. I loved reading along with yur writing. I had fun. COme out with new stories soon.
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Title: ch. 59+ 60
Reviewed By: Zir On: November 02, 2004 15:28 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry, ignore that review WOW, what an amazing, chapters, hmm need to work on my grammer. amyways, WOW, can't wait for more, but sicne you've stressed the ikyness of your computer i will forgive all, not that theres anything to forgive, hmm, nope nothing, nadda thing all perfect, please update at the most conveiniate time for you, grand story.Zirra
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