| "Transformations" Reviews/Comments [ 409 ] |
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Title: ch. 59
Reviewed By: Zir On: November 02, 2004 15:25 EST
Comment/Review:
WOw
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Title: ch. 59
Reviewed By: Zir On: November 02, 2004 15:25 EST
Comment/Review:
WOw
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Title: Kick ass story !!!!!
Reviewed By: Fox fire On: November 01, 2004 22:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story was Kick ass with a capital K , it was awesome no incredible well IT WAS THE BEST DAMN STORY I EVER READ lets just put it that way . I think you should become a writer or something because your sixty chapters i mean WOW it was like seeing someone getting killed with a machine gun and you haveing a front row seat thats how kool it was , its like you got into the characters as you read the story it was THE KICK ASS STORY PEOPLE DREAM ABOUT READING Awesome story , I congradulate you and hope to see more of your work in the future !!!!!!
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Title: Chapter 60
Reviewed By: HanyouGal (Offline) On: November 01, 2004 22:27 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know it's not your fault I try to write and mediaminer messes it up. I'm sorry if I hurt your feelings *sniff sniff* I didn't mean it like a flame. ha ha i kinda screwed up my last insult/review it makes no frickin sense lol oh well the worst happens to the best, love your story soo much great lemons like the descriptions and can really see whats happening in myhead love your writing!
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Title: \/_\/
Reviewed By: Kitsu Kurasei On: November 01, 2004 10:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"FIX YOUR FUCKING STORY!" Lyrica.... I can get a bit annoyed emotional but consider the author for a moment here, she's been working her but off and the fanfiction site changes her work, can you friggin' blame her!? Though I haven't seen a problem when I read on mediaminer, the format was great, is it only other people who see it all smooshed?-Kitsu
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Title: sorry, chapter 60
Reviewed By: Kitsu Kurasei On: November 01, 2004 10:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My last review was for chapter 60, my greatest apologies Dragon's_Lover-sama.-Kitsu
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: Kitsu Kurasei On: November 01, 2004 10:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, but you're saying perfect too much lol. yes, they deserve that I know, I'm a crazed Inu/Kag fan that thinks of them day and night, but I just hope your perfection stays in your writing, not subject, I've been following the exciting times and you always leave a question in my mind, so here's todays question: "What could possibly happen in another couple chapters?" You have created the ultimate perfection, what in it are you changing?-Kitsu
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Title: Chapter 60
Reviewed By: Hououza On: October 31, 2004 20:17 EST
Comment/Review:
A thousand apologies, I forgot about including the chapter number, my bad. Seriously though it was an excellent chapter, really loved this story all the way through. I will admit I don't recognise all of the characters but I still have to get the remainder of the Manga and the Anime so not much I can dpo about that. I understand about the updates, computers are often a pain in the ass...both I and my friends work in IT, some very scathing things to say about a certain company that shall remain nameless *cough*Microsoft*cough* I don't know exactly how to put this in a way that doesn't sound offensive or condescending...I know what you mean about updates, life gets in the way. No-one should expect you to be updating more often that life allows you to, I believe this is supposed to be fun and it isn't when some idiot is harrasing you to update... Sorry, not great with words. Computers yes but people no. Either way I know you most likely won't be able to read this for a while but I'll wish you good luck anyway, don't let the (hopefully) small group of people who don't understand ruin it for you. Till next time good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: essie2 On: October 31, 2004 18:45 EST
Comment/Review:
wow this is a great please update
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Title: Hey
Reviewed By: gale89 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 21:02 EDT
Comment/Review:
hey you. yeah im talken to you. update soon, no imediatly, no NOW! pls
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Reviewed By: Delu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 10:02 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's taken me several days, but I've finally caught up on your fic ^_^ Damn college classes >.< The fic is so awesome!! I love how much detail you put in, how much thought is worked into what the characters do. I thought the battle chapters were awesome, reading them the way they were written showed how fast paced and confusing the battle could be, just action with little time to think! *leaves package* inside is a voodoo doll, made to work on the mass of readers who don't review. Have fun! ^_~
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Reviewed By: Saccharine-Ish (NLO) On: October 28, 2004 21:05 EDT
Comment/Review:
love it! cant wait for the sequal
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Reviewed By: Darkness Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 18:39 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
he cried? wtf lol nice lemon ^_^ and thank you for the link ^_^
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Title: sequal?
Reviewed By: vizmanga On: October 27, 2004 13:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not all that mad that there not going to be anymore lemons( alittle disapponted but i'll get over it 0 i was wondering if you were going to my a sequal that deals with their kids( i mean both i/k and m/s kids)if you do let i/k have a girl please?? also you need an a-bomb vizmanga
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Title: Lyrica Should Screw Herself
Reviewed By: Hanyougal [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 01:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg Lyrica shut the hell uo its an awesome story but your just bitching cuz you are jealous. The green eyed monster is like humping your back. Just shut the fuck up and screw yourself
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