| "Transformations" Reviews/Comments [ 409 ] |
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Title: ch 53
Reviewed By: Zir On: May 20, 2004 14:54 EDT
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Very nice ending, I don't know how you can use it but I give you a giant diamond hammer. A spell was put on it to make it supper light so you can lift it. *Zirra turns and murmurs* but i think it might be cursed too. Keep writing. ZIRRA
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Reviewed By: Farahlayla On: May 20, 2004 10:19 EDT
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i love reading you fic!:) its not the end...yet though right? we get to see how the battle ends i hope!
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Title: the whole damn thing...
Reviewed By: renegade_fuzz On: May 19, 2004 21:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started reading this story last night, starting with chapter one, on ff.net. After reaching chapter 28 (the first lemon?) I decided to switch to mm.org, because I'll admit it, I'm a perv and I love reading that stuff. I stayed up (knowing full well that I had to get up in the morning and work all day) until 4:30 am because I couldn't stop reading your story. I finished reading it (up to chapter 53) today. I absolutely LOVE it. You have a marvelous streak of creativity, and you're quite adept at keeping a reader interested, especially with such a long story with intricate plot details. Just wanted to send you a token of my appreciation. Keep writing. You're doing marvelously!!! *hugs and kisses* (in a joyful non-lecherous way)
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Title: 52/53?
Reviewed By: Hououza On: May 19, 2004 19:07 EDT
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Excellent couple of chapters! Really been enjoying this so far and looking forwards to seeing how it turns out. Personally I read more than I write. In truth I'm on mediaminer and ff.net for at least two hours every night and that been for the last...three years maybe? I agree its fun to write for others but in the end I find I write if only because I enjoy writing, its a way of expressing things that there is no other outlet for and if along the way other people are able to take pleasure in it that's a bonus. Rambling again...sorry. I do that. Seriously look forwards to seeing how this ends, no pressure intened. Write when you can and I will be here to read and review. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza PS. Loved the kirby dancing thing ROTFLOL!
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Reviewed By: Miber On: May 19, 2004 17:23 EDT
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LOL! Hehe, okay, hiz. Miber again, but this time I found out how to review on the site!!!!! It was me who gave you the jewel-ly sword, the Un-Blade. And the Abstract Un-Blade. Well, nice chappie! Gonna read the next one now, good work! And thank you for metioning my sword!
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Title: 53
Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 09:10 EDT
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wait.. this isn't the last chapter is it?? I hope not. But any ways i like the way you brought in the last chapter(s). I can't wait to see if theres an ending!
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 01:06 EDT
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this is very kick ass fanfic it's rock so please update soon
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Reviewed By: misticknight2002 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2004 04:59 EDT
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Ha Ha Ha Ha. Inuyasha will learn to shut up sooner or later.
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Reviewed By: Ky On: May 15, 2004 15:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has to be the best fanfic I've ever read. I have read every single chapter and you're brilliant. My suggestions? More lemons and write faster! It would also be cool if Inu-chan went full demon and blew things up... (maybe if naraku tried to steal kagome or something.) Thank you for your writing, it's awesome!
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Reviewed By: okay543 On: May 15, 2004 00:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay i now no that inu and kag seriously need to be together and that inus a really big pain in the area called possesiveness and i hope they get together and have pups he was hoping on it poor inu nyway i like it as much as i read there must be a lot of perverts around here other than my school
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 20:22 EDT
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this is great please update soon
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Title: *reviews again*
Reviewed By: Hadan Ayame On: May 12, 2004 19:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ya I am reviewing to tell you to update, like now! And to email me back! please..... I will wait for an answer yet again... *tear*
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: May 12, 2004 18:37 EDT
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Er...bye! Well in the mean time here's a review to keep you going... Excellent chapter as always! I know its cruel but I enjoyed seeing what you did to Hojo. The boy really does need to learn to take no for an answer! Till next time good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Zir On: May 07, 2004 15:21 EDT
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very nice, i've never reviwed before because i wanted to read it all.Hurry with the next chapter.
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Title: *hoping to not get hurt*
Reviewed By: Hadan Ayame On: May 04, 2004 20:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I have been wanting to review for awhile but only having time to read about 2 chapters a night. Also If you were wondering, this is Spiffymonkey63090@comcast.net, the one who praises u alot *puffs out chest and acts proud* Well now I have sacrificed a quarter of reading your chapter to write this and I feel like I have accomplished something. well I guess this is good bye...*starts bawling* P.S.-*bows and hands you a gift* *you open it* Inside was an ordinary bag. But inside the bag is an unlimited supply of weapons and scented candals. Don't ask about the candals. Last minute idea. I figured that you already had people giving you this present, so I decided to make it unique.Well bye for real now *chokes back tears*
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