| "Transformations" Reviews/Comments [ 409 ] |
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Reviewed By: misticknight2002 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2003 02:50 EST
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AAUUUUUUUUUUGH!!!!! Why did you have to end it there?! I simply love this story, I almost had a Inu fit when I couldn't find it this morning to finish it. I was on the verge of shreading something(Human or otherwise). I so want to see what happens next. I'm desperate here, please, oh please update soon. If you don't I may just start killing things to vent my frustration,^-^.*smashes nearby tree to splinters with pole-arm* Ok that made me feel a little better, but not much. Mabey I'll go kill a few demons.*smiles thoughtfully* Oh Inuyasha!!^-^ *evil grin*. Please get the next chapter up soon, I so need to see where this will go. Keep writing.^-^
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Reviewed By: Heero Himura On: December 05, 2003 13:28 EST
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Oops forgot to ask, but where are the pics at? Tell me in the next chapter. I want to see those things.
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Reviewed By: Heero Himura On: December 05, 2003 13:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok to start with I just read every chapter this story in under 24 hours. And I have to say, you are one insane girl, but that makes you very funny. The hohos thing made me laugh for a good 5 minutes, and with me that is an impressive amount of time. The lemon chapter wasn't needed, but it was good, and as for over all story I have only one thing to say. Update soon. You aren't the only one with alot of weapons to use. Oh yeah a gift for you DL. *Hands you a chain* There is a huge red dragon at the end of this. He will obey only the person who holds the chain. Enjoy.
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Reviewed By: me On: December 04, 2003 18:41 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good
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Title: wepon
Reviewed By: Myst Runner [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2003 11:59 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
me: yay senseless wepons. *holds out a Graboid egg* Here you go he can eat all your none reviewers. heheheheheheh. Bert Gummer: Huh? not another one. Trio: run for the hills or the graboids will get yah. Me: Hey read my inu fic Boldly Going Nowhere. or i'll sic El Blanco my albino graboid on you. Trio: You are obbsessed with Tremors. Me: so are you.
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Reviewed By: Paragorgon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 21:03 EST
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hey, i got to read three new chaps! ('cause the others were on ff.net before) i'm not one for Inyasha in modern clothing, but hey it works. great job!
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Title: I like it, I loves it, I want some more of it!
Reviewed By: Battousais gal [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 00:59 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! Nice! Keep on going! I can see why it was such a big hit on ff.net........ By the way, couldn't you be an elemental mage, and use wind, water, fire, earth and all of that goodness to threaten, er, tell readers to review? *chuckles at her ebilness* hehehe... have fun, I hope to see the next chapter up soon!
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Reviewed By: ChickensEveryWhere On: November 28, 2003 16:09 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good chapter! A really good story too! Is this the end? If not, update soon!
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Reviewed By: Julie B On: November 28, 2003 03:24 EST
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How will Kagome and Inuyasha handle the situation in the Feudal era? What will Koaga do when he finds out that Inuyasha and Kagome are mates? Please update as soon as possible.
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Reviewed By: ChickensEveryWhere On: November 28, 2003 02:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was on ff.net earlier, and i saw this story. at first i thought someone ripped this off. but then i came here and found out that you are that author. I reviewed your story before they took it off of ff.net. i am LtlSwimmerGurl. I still think that your story is to good!
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Reviewed By: battlewhore [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2003 01:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
good fic! i like it alot. and my personal guess is that she's getting her period. but i really hope you won't make this a "and she smells so damn good to the demons, 'cause now she's in "heat"" thing, 'cause we human girls AREN'T in heat when we have our period. everybody uses that, and it irritates me. i mean, EW? sex while menstruating doesn't really do it for me. it makes more sense to be in heat about a week afterwards. i mean, does it really make sense biologically that we'd be fertile when we're bleeding? in fact, that's probably the SAFEST time to have protection-less sex. it would just be really ... messy. ew. - battlewhore "i prefer the term 'morally challenged.'"
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Reviewed By: Zsenny [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2003 00:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great. ^_^ I love your writing style, a pleasure to read. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Paragorgon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2003 00:42 EST
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AN UPDATE, AN UPDATE! YIPPI! to be honest i don't remember some things about your story, like what's with Kagome. :( but that's why i'm reading it now! =D YIPPI! (i had a lot of candy to day.)
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Reviewed By: eRICYAMAHA89 On: October 31, 2003 23:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its a realy good story i cant wait util chap 8
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Title: i have your story saved
Reviewed By: vap [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2003 20:46 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
DL, i have your story saved on my computer but im not quite sure how to get it to you, i saved all but the last two chapters as one word document, if you have aim my name "aim name" is daemonpyreblue and my email is rvap@msn.com
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