| "Winter Murders" Reviews/Comments [ 70 ] |
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Reviewed By: Skyre Moonfire [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2003 06:49 CDT
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Awwww . . . what a sweet ending. I really do like this. It almost made me cry at the end when Kurama was "dieing". How cute. ^_^ I'm glad they cheated Death too, that selfish bitch. ~_^
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Reviewed By: Skyre Moonfire On: September 26, 2003 23:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ARGH!!!!!! Where's the rest of it? ARGH!!! I want more of Winter Dreams. It's really good damn it!! But thanks for my little weak part in there. I'll try to put you in one of mine sometime. Keep it up Ifurita. ^_^
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Reviewed By: XxAllisonxX [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2003 18:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*jumps for joy* update!!! *blushes* no cliffy hurray for me thanks XD...I have school no!!! first day and i already have homework what kind of world is this? grrr... No what? i fell asleep in class today @.@ go fig. no matter how busy my schudule is i'll keep reading. ^-^ wonder what kurama was dreaming >> hehe... Oh and i really like this chapter...Yusuke is such and idiot XD
--Ally Hearts |
Reviewed By: jabyu On: August 31, 2003 20:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
please please please please write more soon.!!!! |
Reviewed By: XxAllisonxX [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2003 19:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!! you updated, and i thank you. Your writing skills are commendable, I like this fic a lot because of the shear originality and it really pulls you in. Yet again you left it at a clifthanger. I know it keeps the readers coming, but i don't like clifthangers its so...mean to leave me hanging. You should have seen how pathetic i got when i reached the end. Its so pathetic its funny XD XD Any who you just keep you your writing and i'll keep up the reading, kay? I'm a REALLY REALLY BIG fan of your writing, and i extra emphasize on the really and big. ^-^
--Ally Hearts |
Reviewed By: Anna On: August 22, 2003 00:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, good job, it takes my back to our litte project. The gore I mean. You are such a graphic writer it's creepy, like with the little girl!
I do enjoy your detial and the way you write when It comes to your love scenes, (there are some relationships I like better than others. I also think it's great that you tool a series I wasn't so fond of (sorry!) and got got me hooked on your stories about it. Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Anna On: August 22, 2003 00:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, good job, it takes my back to our litte project. The gore I mean. You are such a graphic writer it's creepy, like with the little girl!
I do enjoy your detial and the way you write when It comes to your love scenes, (there are some relationships I like better than others. I also think it's great that you tool a seris I wasn't so fond of (sorry!) and got got me hooked on your stories about it. Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Anna On: August 20, 2003 23:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an interesting instalment of your story to read. Your love story between Kurama and Hiei is cute(even though I usally don't care for it). You have a great sense of imagery and you know how to get your reader to feel the way you want them to, (like the little girls death gave me the creeps!). Your transitions are good, and so is your use of the characters. I wasn't able to put the installment down ,then I was left wanting more. Which is an accomplishment considering I'm not as fond of this series as you are. Good job Sarah. |
Reviewed By: Anna On: August 20, 2003 23:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an interesting instalment of your story to read. Your love story between Kurama and Hiei is cute(even though I usally don't care for it). You have a great sense of imagery and you know how to get your reader to feel the way you want them to, (like the little girls death gave me the creeps!). Your transitions are good, and so is your use of the characters. I wasn't able to put the installment down ,then I was left wanting more. Which is an accomplishment considering I'm not as fond of this seris as you are. Good job Sarah. |
Reviewed By: XxAllisonxX [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2003 10:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is great, I really hope you update soon. Its getting soo intresting. ^-^
--Ally Hearts |
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