| "The Princess of Avalon And The Prince Of Egypt" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: I LOVE IT! On: April 04, 2005 11:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep writing
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Reviewed By: amy_lee... On: April 04, 2005 07:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so GOOD ^_^ Need more Bakura!!! Love the fic update soon plz ^_^
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Reviewed By: Killah Frank On: December 05, 2004 14:46 CST
Comment/Review:
Keep up the great work!!
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Reviewed By: witchhunterR [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 20:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i absolutly love this story! pls hurry and update! ~Ayame~
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Reviewed By: desperate On: November 23, 2004 17:44 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
UPDATE! EVERY AUTHOR DOES THIS 2 ME!!!! THEY NEVER CONTINUE THE STORY! IT JUST STOPS!! CAN YOU PLEASE UPDATE?
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Reviewed By: Lady Raven On: October 15, 2004 16:42 CDT
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this is hialious u've got 2 rite mor
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Reviewed By: Lady Raven On: October 15, 2004 16:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
yes it should b pg-13
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Reviewed By: hawkeye315 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 15:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
The story can still be PG because the kissing is not very obscene. But if you choose to add some adult material to your fic later on, then you would have to change the rating.
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Reviewed By: hawkeye315 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 15:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
You should have someone edit your fanfiction because there are some spelling and grammar problems. The story is okay though.
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Reviewed By: no one in peticular On: May 20, 2004 14:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have really enjoyed it so far. please continue. and please make sakura be with yami because bakura is mine! bwahahaha! ok... i'm ok now.... lol ^^
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Reviewed By: DeathsAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2003 21:26 CST
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I think I'm going to agree with the others more detail would be something to work on and making it clearer on who is talking. Please write more though cause I am wondering what's going to happen to Sakura and Yami, and Bakura for that matter.
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Reviewed By: mistress_of_ra [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2003 18:30 CST
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It's nice but add more detail! I should know being an authoress myself! The only part I don't like is the Bakura and Sakura kissing scene. I like Sakura and Yami. But hey, if she wants Bakura I get Yami to myself!
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Reviewed By: fire_blade On: October 26, 2003 22:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a good story and i hope you can updat this but ne thing you could work on is the arguements in this story for there sort of make you lose interiest in the story for a little because they are a bit boring other then this is a good story
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Reviewed By: Medatsu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2003 16:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh ya.....now ur getting better but MORE DETAIL!!! Senery and more emotions! U wanna be a good writter dont ya?! ....Oh and make longer chapters...It would be better.
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Reviewed By: Medatsu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2003 16:38 CDT
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Ok have you ever heard of detail?! And What about "Bla" things to show someone is talking! In recap senery+ character+ emotion details and clear identification of conversaitions...got that?
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