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Reviewed By: powerpuffbarbie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2004 03:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. it's been a couple weeks since i was allowed online(grounded) so fo course i had a lot of reading to do. and right now i'm about ready to drop dead asleep. it is afterall 1:29 a.m. here. but anyways, that was awsome. considering that was your first lemon, it pretty damn good. better than i could ever write. i love how you did the last couple of chapters. most autors would just skip to the happily ever after without having any last minute conflicts. but you, you are amazing. you know exactly what i want to hear in the story. if i didn't kow better i'd swear you were reading my mind. maybe you are? well i hope you update soon, now that i'm finally off grounding i can go online again, THANK GOD! hope to hear more from you soon. Later, Ja Ne, Amor Tu, Amor Mihi. Ciao, Linze
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Title: Awesome first lemon
Reviewed By: Daxemon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2004 12:47 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For a first lemon that was pretty off the hook. It was not raunchy and crude like some lemons, even when the writers are trying to be subtle. It was very descriptive and brought to your mind and your body many thoughts and sensations. You are beyond talented. I look forward to the remaining chapters.
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Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: Spica [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2004 12:14 PST
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That was yout first lemon? wow. You mist be an excellent author to do that. I'm postitive I don't know too many authors who can write excellent lemons and even less for those who can write excellent first lemons. Still want to thank for letting me use the idea. I feel sorry for inu thought. Maybe he could be paired up with another inu hanyou. Please update soon. You're killing me with the suspense of what happens next.
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Reviewed By: lazerbeam12345 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2004 20:59 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Really like this fic. It is one of only a few that have had me riveted to my seat. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Onegai_koi On: March 12, 2004 18:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! WAI!!! i knoe this is a sesskag ficcie, a great one too, but poor inuyasha! I LOVED ur fic, but i'm also a sucker for original pairings! Alternate are okay too, but i just feel so bad for inu-chan! i can just imagine him looking sad! i know in this story he deserves it for ditchin kagome, but can you write an inukag one too? inuyasha needs lovin too! thx. ~koibito~
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Title: Yeyey!
Reviewed By: vayne [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2004 07:08 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
>>YAY~! this story is really great...that was a good Lemon and the setting was just perfect. Good luck on the other chappies too...this story really made me start reading Sess/Kag fics.
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Title: Review!
Reviewed By: Dark Paine [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2004 16:39 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT Lemon i LOVED it! Nice job! I love reading this story, its just so cool lol! Keep up the great work! Dark Paine
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2004 19:20 PST
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That was sooooo good!!!!!!!! And it was your first lemon too!!!!!! Two thumbs up and I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2004 18:24 PST
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YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!!! Go Sesshou! Go Kagome! Go Yume! Go Sesshou! Go Kagome! Go Yume! YAY!
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2004 18:22 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You know, for a first lemon, that came across very well ^_^ Besides, a lot of the lemons detract from the story ... this one didn't do that at all. It was a good chapter!
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Reviewed By: Loni (lon lon-chan) On: March 09, 2004 17:39 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LEMON!!! tee hee yay! its me...lon lon-chan ^_^ it was sooooOoOoOOOOo goood!!!!!!!!! i have to go smile and have random fits of joyous insane laughter untill my face falls off ^_^....if I keep saying this im going to feel like a complete idiot but IT WAS AWESOME!!!!!!! and yes i am so a rabid Inuyasha fan...im oh so obssesed...@_@ tee ha ha....ok ok this is getting to be toooooo long...like my fan letter :: blushes slightly with embarassment :: hohoho it waaas great! ^0^
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Reviewed By: fox flame not signed in On: March 09, 2004 17:06 PST
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yay! ekk soooo happy ~~! great chapter ass usuall!!! cant wait for more!!!
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Title: Magnificient!
Reviewed By: MKyrissaean [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2004 16:47 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was your first lemon you say? I don't believe you. That was far too good to be a first lemon. Very good story. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Medatsu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2004 12:51 PST
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THAT WAS YOUR FIRST LEMON?! Damn girl your good...Teach me oh wise one! jk! But hey who wouldn't like this!?
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Reviewed By: tsuki hana [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2004 12:06 PST
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Wow! Was that really the first lemon you've ever written? Great chapter and I can't wait to see how you're going to end it!
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