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Reviewed By: Medatsu-chan On: December 30, 2003 17:14 PST
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Damn! Leaver it right there why don't you!! Come on....did u catch on yet? I WANT MORE!!!! DAMNIT!
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Reviewed By: IsisTheEgyptianGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2003 16:58 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Isis: Are sure it's not necessary? Because you know I could... just kidding. This is again great and wonderful. By the way CF, here, I'm sorry it's late, *hands CF 20lb chocolate bar* Merry Christams. I gave one to Shippo and Rin too. Shippo and Rin: We still have ours! We're not even halfway done! Sesshoumaru: This is as Isis says great and wonderful. However, I'm not sure I'd take advantage of a female that way while training... Kagome: *in background* Hey Isis, isn't that what Sesshoumaru did to you when he was teaching you how to fight? Isis: *nods* Yep just like I told you and Sango! See, he can be nice and not completely psycho! Sango and Kagome: *giggle while Sesshoumaru runs over to Isis trying to shut her up.* Isis: *manages to get Sesshoumaru's hand off her mouth long enough to talk* Anyways, Happy New Year to you Yume and CF! Update soon and have lots of fun!!
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Reviewed By: IsisTheEgyptianGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2003 16:58 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Isis: Are sure it's not necessary? Because you know I could... just kidding. This is again great and wonderful. By the way CF, here, I'm sorry it's late, *hands CF 20lb chocolate bar* Merry Christams. I gave one to Shippo and Rin too. Shippo and Rin: We still have ours! We're not even halfway done! Sesshoumaru: This is as Isis says great and wonderful. However, I'm not sure I'd take advantage of a female that way while training... Kagome: *in background* Hey Isis, isn't that what Sesshoumaru did to you when he was teaching you how to fight? Isis: *nods* Yep just like I told you and Sango! See, he can be nice and not completely psycho! Sango and Kagome: *giggle while Sesshoumaru runs over to Isis trying to shut her up.* Isis: *manages to get Sesshoumaru's hand off her mouth long enough to talk* Anyways, Happy New Year to you Yume and CF! Update soon and have lots of fun!!
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Title: Nice!
Reviewed By: ErehwonDreamer3013 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2003 16:29 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is fantastic! I love it. I'm so glad that you've finally updated. This fic has got to be my favorite. It has everything that i think should be in a story. I hope that you keep up the good work and please give my compliments to your muse! ErehwonDreamer
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Title: I love it!!!!
Reviewed By: RavenCrow16 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2003 19:46 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your creativity is GRREEEEEEEEAAAAAAAATTTTTTTT!!!!! I love this story...to be honest it was one of the first that I read when I joined mm.org. I hope you update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2003 18:45 PST
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Inuyasha is sooooooooooooooooooooooo stupid!!!!!!!And I know Sess loves Kagome but it's not only that Inuyasha let her down that she has to get over its the fact that she nearly died!!And as for Kikyou, I'm going to crack open her skull with my keyboard!!! MUHAHAHAH oops sorry my demoness side came out there. Hey CF! If I give you 12 pounds of milk chocolate will you make Yume write faster?? Do we have a deal?
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Title: ^__^!
Reviewed By: Onyx Sapphire On: December 28, 2003 19:15 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tis as great as i expected it to be...What cant i say except update soon or else..*grabs her monkey and holds a gun to its head* pookie gets it...~.~; ~ Power to all mantally derranged otaku female dragons!!! ~*~ Karina
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Reviewed By: 12blue12 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2003 10:34 PST
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oh yeah update soon! PLZ!
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Title: nice fic
Reviewed By: 12blue12 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2003 10:34 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i finished the fic yesterday yor fic was so good i read it all in one sitting!
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Title: Wonderful
Reviewed By: jeannie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2003 08:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MIGOD!!!! I just found your fic (thanks to InusDemoness) and you kept me up until 1:30 in the morning, and I have to get up early, too!! But you are writing an awesome fic, tho you keep transposing letters occassionally, and sometimes the sentence structure doesn't quite make sense, it is a very good fic. Wow, now I'm writing run-ons, and a bad one at that! ;D Anyhoo, keep on writing, and I will keep on reading (sorry, no ideas, too tired!). Looking forward to your next chapter!! Good luck in taming your muse!
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Reviewed By: Medatsu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2003 19:31 PST
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ouuuuuuuu ....you good!
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Reviewed By: Ata(not signed in) On: December 23, 2003 19:10 PST
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Ahh! I am soooo loving this fic. Even though I feel a *tiny* bit bad for Inu, he really deserves to feel the pain he causes to poor Kagome! And I also love how sweet Sesshy is being... it's good cause it's not all exagerated keep it up! Luv, Ata
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Reviewed By: Priss On: December 23, 2003 12:25 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW... poor Kagome and almost but only almost poor InuYasha. I hope you will really pair Shess/Kag soon... sorry for my grammer I am sic, damn flu
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Reviewed By: Bazingnymph7 On: December 22, 2003 22:54 PST
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what happen to the heart-broken hanyou??? Why cant kikyo just take Naraku to hel with her??? hey, maybe Iy fall for another chick... update soon, the suspense(and curiosity) is killing me!!!
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Reviewed By: Striking Falcon(not signed in) [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2003 14:02 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SF: {::glaring at CF::} SWEET JUMPING CHRISTMAS!!!! YOU STOLE ALL THE CANDY CANES?!!! Kagome: CF, how could you? CF: CF only wanted- Inu-chan: You're screwed now buddy. Santa won't bring any presents to bad kids. CF: But CF only wanted to-{::sniffs and starts to cry::} SF: {::hugs CF::} Don't worry. I'm sure if you explain to Santa, he'll understand. CF: Does SF think so? SF: {::nods::} We'll do that in a few minutes. I must speak to Yume-chan. {::smiles as CF walks away::} Sorry for blowing up the kid's head. She's just so cute sometimes. Oh, and has she shown any powers yet? She should be a lighening youkai, like me. Anyway, great chapter as always. I'm so jealous. My 'Trial' chapter turned out like crap and you're writing creme brulee stories! Silver Fox: Like she understood that. SF: Shut up Silver. I'm so sad! I'm leaving for my aunt's Wed. morning! Little Kids for miles around until next Monday. Silver Fox: ARE YOU FOR REAL?! WHY DIDN'T YOU TELL ME?! SF: Moms told you when she told me. So pray for us Yume-chan. We're going to run through Hell. {::pats Silver's back as he starts to cry::} See you when we get back!
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