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Title: Yume's Most Awesome First Fic!!! ^-^
Reviewed By: angelicflare [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2005 10:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fic was the most awesome fic i ever read!!!! I loved every thing about it even the its and a's & the's. I just loved it it was so good that if u woulnt have said so i would have believed that u wrote many other fics before this one! Forget Me Not is now my most favorite fan fiction! Keep up the good work! ^-^
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Title: A Interesting Fan Fic.
Reviewed By: Rachel Zuniga On: August 21, 2005 22:24 PDT
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Well the story had a good combination of action and romance and a bashful ending that can make anybody blush.
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Reviewed By: AZN GrrrL On: July 24, 2005 10:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it!!!!!!! I might have said this to someone before but, they didn't continue THEIR fanfic so I take it back and now here it is to you:YOU NEED TO GET THIS PUBLISHED!!!!!!! YOU"D MAKE MILLIONS!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh and for the sequel i have an idea! I don't know if the sequel was already made or not but, if it wasn't then take this as a sugestion! o.k. I thought the first few chapies should be a humoungous flashback being discussed by non other than the famous couple! It should state their anticipation for their first child and Inu should get a new love! And kagome should've sealed a powerful demon, only to be awaked by another demon they later work together to try and kill the prince of the westernlands because of his feared demon and miko blood(of course the whole awakening part should be after the flashback). And right in the middle of the finle battle there new baby should be born with powers far more than any evil and its pure!!! of course having her parents and sibling being killed won't do for this one!!!! and ends up saving everyone! even if you don't use this i just wanted to get these ideas out now if only your story was the actual show's plot!!!!!!!!!
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Title: =)a kawaii lemon...
Reviewed By: DarkAngelTwilight*DAT* On: July 21, 2005 17:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is one of the best done sesshy fanfics i have ever read(not to mention the longest) i had no problem with the lemon, it was excelent. i was brought to tears by a couple of parts. and histerical laughter in others. overall, it was most enjoyable. especially the ending...kawaii!!!!also please email me at lovechihaya@excite.com id really like to exchange ideas with you. i am currently writing a fanfic as well....based on sesshy.
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Reviewed By: prinsess_serenity59 (nsi) On: July 11, 2005 18:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, thats...so...SAD!!! This story is like one of those stories you never want to end! I loved it! and one of the parts of the story remind me of part of one of my poems: "I love you. And always will. I'll love you till the end. But I hope you know I can only love you, as a friend" I know it's not the egsact (sp? lol) same thing but it's close! I hope you did well in school! I bid thee fare well! hehe Bye Lily!¢¾
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Title: I'm finished
Reviewed By: Inu_RebelBabe07 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2005 13:53 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story made me so happy. It made me laugh so much at 4 oclock in the morning, my dad told me to shut up. I havent read a good Sess/Kag story ever. But this story blew my previous favorites out of the water. You are very talented. I urge you to continue writing and drawing. Now many people are talented in two artistic views.
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Title: Man!
Reviewed By: Xhanthia On: June 26, 2005 22:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I just finished reading Chapter 25, and I'm sitting here thinking: 'It's about friggin' time!' I love your story! I'm writing one myself at animespiral.com under Xhanthia, and your story just puts mine to shame. Grrr....I envy you! Oh, and my muse TR says that CF does an ineresting job in inspiring you. Of course, TR seems to have taken a vacation, because I have the biggest writters block in history. Still, Kudos to your story! I'm almost done with it. I'll review again when I'm done. Oh, and I love how you've portrayed Sesshoumaru. He's just so sweet, and caring, and kind, yet he has a bit of his own self. Again, Kudos!
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Reviewed By: ClemsonGurlie92 On: June 10, 2005 08:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was very enjoyable! i like how at the end wat you did with Naraku! that was funny how kikyo pinned him to a tree he surley didnt c that one coming! it was awesome! lol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !! PlZ continue your good writing!!!!!1 ~Your Fan, ClemsonGurlie92
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Title: ?
Reviewed By: shiva11 On: June 08, 2005 19:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story was beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. I nearly cried, honest truth. There is also an author that writes stories as good as yours. You can find her at animespiral.com under the name kirara81 an d read her stories. My peasonal favorite of hers is A Demon's Ultimate Sacrifice. That made me cry. Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: LunaFireDragon On: May 16, 2005 12:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! You're story was absolutely awesome and thats all i got to say. i stayed up till 3 in the morning and went to work as a zombie, but it was totally worth it! Keep up the amazing work, and i hope to read more of your work in the future. And however sad it is, no matter how much we spend on Inuyasha, or want him, he will never be ours. :( I'd settle for Shippou though. :) It's been an honour to read your story. thank you. Sincerely, Jen :)
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Reviewed By: FlameTwirler [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 14:01 PDT
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this is a great story! I don't think you really made Sesshoumaru too ooc, because the whole point was that he was changing - so had he been the exact same stoic, icy demon the whole time that would have been off. or so it seems to me at least... good stuff.
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Reviewed By: Moon LaFleur On: April 18, 2005 13:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an amazingly beautiful, heartwarming and enchanting tale. Amazing work my dear. ~ Whispering Wolf
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Reviewed By: hermonine On: April 10, 2005 17:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your story. The ending was so cute! lol Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: J-Chan On: March 21, 2005 14:22 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sesshoumaru is too funny in this chapter! Persoanlly I love the pairing of him and Kagome. I just can't get into the original pairing of her and Inuyasha. Wonderfully written.
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Reviewed By: J-Chan On: March 21, 2005 14:13 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am totally obessesed with Sesshoumaru! I love how you wrote him here and I love all the other characters. I think overall this is going to be a great story.
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