| "Home Is Where The Heart Is" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mirah On: July 03, 2006 14:22 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is really cool so far. I hope you continue to write more!! please!!??
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Title: UPDATE DAMN YOU
Reviewed By: Darth-Pyro [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2006 21:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE DAMN YOU!!!! this story rules but its been YEARS AND YOU SAID WAY BACK IN 2003 THAT YOU WOULD. DID YOU DIE OR SOMETHING. sorry abou the caps but this is one of the few good fanfics where thecharactors act themselves. UPDATE SOON OR I WILL SEND AN ARMY OF ZOMBIE HAMSTERS TO DESTEROY YOU.... now where did i put them
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Reviewed By: warriornite [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2005 22:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic so far. PLEASE update I beg of you. I really like this pairing and we almost never see a good one and based on what you've already writen this is an excellent one.
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Title: good fic
Reviewed By: cjs On: March 07, 2005 04:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic is really good im looking forward to another chap as soon as u can write it. Also i dont see many Luffy/Nami fics so this follows the plot and was a great story
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Reviewed By: BurninG GN On: February 22, 2005 22:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZE UPDATE COME ON!!! I BEEN WAITING FOREVER AND SO HAV OTHER VIEWERS!THIS STORY KICKS @$$ AND I WANNA SEE MORE! CHAPTER 3! COME ON,WHY WOULD U STOP AT A CLIFFHANGER!!!!!???WOOOOO IM DONE NOW.But seriously luffy/nami parings makes the best sense cause luffy done so much for her.(what has sanji done for her that changed her life?) Seriously please continue,i will not allow this fic to die.OR HAS ITTTTTT.DUNNNNNNNNNDUNNNN DUUNNNNN DAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!! LUFFFY AND NAMI ROCKS! NO WAIT THE STRAWHATS ROCK!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Oniisan On: January 16, 2005 02:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its really hard to find good fanfics around u know? most are outlandishly wierd like "_character from anime_ is a bartender, _another character_ is a shripper what happens when they meet?". I don't really like that kind of stuff. I like reading about what actually could happen. I also like it when the characters are actualy acting like themselves not like they have a a whole different personality. this is what makes your fanfic worth reading for me, and make me need to read the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Secret lady On: January 10, 2005 18:19 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey I been waiting over two months for the third chapter!!!\ Wheeenn is part three going to be done!!!!!!!!!???????????????????
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Reviewed By: Valeth On: November 04, 2004 16:35 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey,I've read ur story.It's nice cant wait to read the next chapter.Will u continue it?Pleeeaasee.....
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Title: bravo
Reviewed By: Minako On: October 19, 2004 19:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I read your update in chapter 2 and I like how you are going with the story.Only thing I ask you is skip the oral part.Its kinda gross...But since this is your story, do whatever you wish.
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Reviewed By: Ise-chan On: October 04, 2004 23:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ne, ne... when will you update? I wait for the next chapter so eagerly. I can so see Luffy and Nami reacting like this after all that went through the Arlong saga. It's too bad it really didn't... -sighs- well, I can hope, ne? So you'll update soon, I hope, and tell Mourning-kun and I when you do? You can reach us at mourningkun@hotmail.com, nyo. Please continue the story!
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Reviewed By: Foxy Tai On: August 31, 2004 19:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There's no chapter 3! Me is very sad! Anyway I think your going at great job on the characters and the story so far. One of the pictures on my wall is of Nami wearing Luffy's hat while he beat Arlong! And I know that you haven't updated in a whole year, but, could you? PLEASEEEEE!! If you do just e-mail me (Tai18@netscape.com) ta ta for now!
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: Gwinna [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2003 22:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did an amazing job with Luffy! Write mor,e write more! I can't wait. BTW, i'm only reading the mangas, I didn't even know there WAS an anime series, so it was sorta' confusing at first, but overall a great fic. Keep writing! ^____^ ~_^
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Reviewed By: dethorats On: September 25, 2003 15:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't worry about Luffy's in-characterness. You're doing a great job so far. It's nice to see him portrayed as more than just an idiot. After all, in the series he can be very insightful, especially when you least expect it. He's also carefree and open to new experiences, with his lust for life. Good job on Nami too. The Arlong saga gets used a lot for romance fics of various pairings, obviously because many emotions were brought into play during the whole thing. I like how you've written her so far. Overall, good job! I look forward to the next part.
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Reviewed By: dethorats On: September 22, 2003 02:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't worry about Luffy's in-characterness. You're doing a great job so far. It's nice to see him portrayed as more than just an idiot. After all, in the series he can be very insightful, especially when you least expect it. He's also carefree and open to new experiences, with his lust for life. Good job on Nami too. The Arlong saga gets used a lot for romance fics of various pairings, obviously because many emotions were brought into play during the whole thing. I like how you've written her so far. Overall, good job! I look forward to the next part.
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Reviewed By: Jeff1 On: September 22, 2003 00:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I read the one piece manga and some of the refrences confuse me since Luffy just beat Buggy the clown but i can already see a Luffy Nami get together and this is a good and intresting start to that I can also say that so far you have kept them perfectly IC thou i think luffy might have reacted more if not the same way as nami thought he would but pls update soon im engoying this. Jeff1 Jkelanahan@yahoo.com
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