| "Change Of Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 57 ] |
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Title: yay!!
Reviewed By: Zoey Hellmaster On: October 10, 2003 11:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fics NEEDS to be continued!!! Please more MORE!!! ^0^
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Reviewed By: the one and only eunice! On: October 08, 2003 22:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
mwuahahaha! hi stephanie! yep, its me! so that was the story i was reading from ur book i stole from u? its pretty good now i finally got to read the whole story. update soon or else...
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Reviewed By: gi 2 On: October 08, 2003 00:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hI! yah! another chapter! hurry and write 600 more! it was my b-day last sunday! u can think of it as a present by wrting more chapters pllleeeeeeeasssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! fast...hurry hurry hurry!
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Title: Chapter 4
Reviewed By: Bakuraluva [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2003 19:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey! I think I reviewed this chappie on ff.net, but I guess this one is different because you added the lemon? I don't think that your lemon sucked at all! I think that as long as a scene makes you feel what the characters are feeling (or at least what you think they're feeling) then it is successful. You think that Bakura is going to be nice to Ryou, giving him little love bites or whatever, and then all of a sudden, he shows how EVIL he is! And the shortness of it kind of shows how Ryou won't get real love from Bakura, that Bakura is selfish and unkind. Have I babbled on enough? ^^
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Reviewed By: alostblackcat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2003 18:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
it's really cool, thanks for updating more seto and jou fluff please i love them together
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Reviewed By: kuramaandkarasu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2003 19:38 CDT
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heylo again!!!! animegurl6 here! still luv your fics... update soon plz? and any other reviewers feedback u might do, could u just have me as kuramaandkarasu and drop the animegurl6? pleasies?
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Reviewed By: Bakuraluva [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2003 21:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Don't listen to them! Cliffies are the way you keep 'em coming back! And school is good for you (I'm not even in it and I find that hard to swallow O_o)
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Reviewed By: Ragna01 On: September 20, 2003 14:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dON'T WORRY ABOUT SCHOOL AND JUST
CONTINUE!!!! |
Reviewed By: kuramaandkarasu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2003 21:36 CDT
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did u put this u on fanfiction.net? j/w... it roxs btw |
Reviewed By: LQ On: September 12, 2003 19:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Give more or the dust bunnies shall attack your home and make it all dusty! x_x Please? More? You left it a horribly cruel cliffhanger. |
Title: cliffie!!!
Reviewed By: alostblackcat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2003 22:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was a good fic you gotta continue and don't leaveanymore cliffies you gotta continue!!! |
Reviewed By: Ally Hearts On: August 30, 2003 22:16 CDT
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>< now that wasn't very nice. you just left meh hanging. update soon plz.... |
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