| "Of Gods and Monsters" Reviews/Comments [ 161 ] |
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Reviewed By: Aditu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2003 10:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well done, I loved how you worked with Teles' emotions throughout her decision. That is one thing that I really enjoy about your writing, the characterization, you do such an excellent job with getting the emotions and thoughts of each one across to us readers. There are moments that one can actually relate to the characters, feel what they feel and understand why they do or say what they do. At the end you have left me concerned about Teles and the little one. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens, how her risk all plays out. Oh, and before I forget, thank you for not waiting till Friday to update, I don't think anyone is going to complain about that ;) Have a Happy Thanksgiving. Best Wishes
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Title: excellent
Reviewed By: rage2velvet [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2003 14:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is one of the most well-written, intelligent and creative fan fics w/Sesshoumaru featured that I have read. It is a pleasure reading your work and please once this is completed write more. the initial tension between Teles and Sess is superb in the beginning- you keep him true to form while "evolving" his personality. Keep going. I am an avid studier of wolrd mythology and you've done a remarkable job with it all.
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Reviewed By: Kyana [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2003 14:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love this story and the last chapter is the best. Please continue and update soon.
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Reviewed By: Aditu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2003 08:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another wonderful chapter, thank you for updating this fic. I still can't get over sometimes how talented you are with your writing, it completely captures my attention, everything that happens throughout the reading I can easily picture in my mind. Lol, I reread Kagome and InuYasha's scene a few times, smiling and sighing over it. That was so well done, they were kept in character so much that it seemed real. As for the other scene of Sesshoumaru, there are times I want to shake both him, and Teles too, lol. Thanks again for the wonderful chapter and I'm looking forward to the next, as all your fanfic fans are. Best Wishes
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Reviewed By: Scathach [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2003 23:47 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, mercy. I think I'm gonna cry. The scene between Inu Yasha and Kagome was so sweet and awkward and touching...and perfect. Another excellent chapter.
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Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: Demoness of the Dark [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2003 23:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How in the world you could only have nine reviews is beyond my comprehension. You are an excellent writer! Your style of writing is perfect for the story and adds to it's beauty. I have been following this story from ff.net and now to mm.org. The way you write draws people into the story and keeps them there. I would compare it to seeing it in real life. Your descriptions are some of the best I've read and definately helps with the mental picture. I should have reviewed earlier in the story, sorry bout that. I just wanted to say to keep up the excellent story that this is and I look foward to reading the next chapters.
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Reviewed By: tgyf On: November 14, 2003 13:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
going strong keep up the good work pump it out -another chapter i mean
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Reviewed By: Sweetapple [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2003 22:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Very intriguing way of combining greek mythology and Inuyasha. I am currently writing a Sess/OC fic as well in case you're interested and this is the first sess/OC fic I've read so far and it's great! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Aditu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2003 12:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been enjoying this fic for quite a while now, though been reading it on Iridescent Dreams, lol, don't know why I didn't see it here earlier. Anyway just wanted to say that you are doing a wonderful job with writing this, love the characterizations, the descriptions, basically everything. Very compelling. Looking forward to the next chapter (and know that I know I can find it here I don't have to wait as long for ID to update ;) but still go there anyway, lol) Best Wishes!
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Title: This story kicks arse
Reviewed By: rayjayiscrazy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2003 14:11 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your writing style and your way of mixing in mythology with Inuyasha. I'm writing a fic of my own and maybe you'd want to check it out. rayjay
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Reviewed By: Scathach [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2003 22:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent, excellent fic. You've obviously put a lot of work into the characterization, and everyone is totally believable. Please, keep it up!
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Title: Outright Praise and Encouragement
Reviewed By: therhoda On: October 23, 2003 12:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I so adore this Fic, and since I do i want to encourage and cheer for the person that puts there effort into great writing. So I am reviewing so that others can see what a wonder they need to read! Besides that I want to cheer on for the next Installment!!
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Reviewed By: seryn On: October 17, 2003 22:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooh! my god this isso good.... can't believe those bastards wouldn't review this for u..... damn this is a better job then wha ti can do.... don't worry i'll reccommend this book to all my friends..... this the best fan fic i ever read of inuYasha. i love ur story
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Reviewed By: AsianEyes [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2003 16:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe it, this is the BEST original character fanfic I've ever read, and it's one of the best fanfics I've read too! You are a very good writer, and I really love this fanfic. It's so not fair that you don't have alot of reviews...original character fics just DON'T get enough respect. I admit, I never really like original character fics...until I read yours. You are a great writer, and it seems that much thought was put into writing this fic. Good job! I look forward to more.
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Reviewed By: inuyhakmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2003 11:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so clever an good can't wait for the next chapter
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