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| "In the Beginning..." Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] | | Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: iy lvr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2003 00:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I' ve only read one chapter, but I it's really good so far. You just need a little more spacing.
| Title: You won't believe this...
Reviewed By: Muse-chan1 On: September 08, 2003 19:16 CDT
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Looks like I'm the first... :)So far this is very interesting, and well written. The only thing I have a problem with is the spacing. But, other than that it's pretty good. I got something really funny to tell you. You probably won't believe this, but; your second title Daimyo is the same as my middle name Daimyo. I just wanted to share that with you, because I thought it was a little funny. Well anyways, hope to see more from this fiction. Ja ne. Good luck. | | Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] |
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