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Reviewed By: fujinakaheero [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 20:01 CDT
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I just wanted to stop by and tell you that this really was a great story! I really loved it ^_~ It's sad though that is had to come to an end but we all knew it was going to end sooner or later... ha.. I'm reviewing now after I've read this story so long again, I'm sorry >.< But I am telling you now, I really loved this story! Anyways Ja Ne! Fujinakaheero
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Title: OMG!!!
Reviewed By: Lella [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 22:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I read yur stori and loved it! I found out about it from my friend,who also enjoyed it. I thought it was realllly good. it was suspensful and Shocking at parts. Active imagination ^_~ Bye!!
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Reviewed By: Catherine On: April 29, 2004 06:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am literally breathless. This is one of the most stunning, moving pieces I have read in a very long time. Well done... exceedingly well done.
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Title: Perfect Ending
Reviewed By: Lord Gackt [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2004 21:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'd been following this story for so long and then started skipping out on reading the updates toward the end,but now that I've finished I can give you all the praise deserved. I loved this story. You are a very creative writer. Keep up all the good work.
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Reviewed By: Saya-chan On: January 23, 2004 23:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS SOOOOOO GREAT NO DA! I love it a whole bunch! It's so deep and in tune with the mind body and soul! Heero and Duo make an excellent couple and you've portrayed that great! You are very talented that you are! I was moved to tears ;_; it was just a beautiful story! Thank you for making such a wonderful story like this! I tip my hat off to you no da! ~Saya-chan
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Reviewed By: eien_ni_kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2004 14:30 CST
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I really loved the ending. If i were you i would right a sequal to this. It's just a suggestion.
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Reviewed By: Kico Yushimi On: December 30, 2003 10:34 CST
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OMG IT WAS SO GOOD U MUST WRITE MORE I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!!! Kico Yushimi ^_-
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Reviewed By: Javanese [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2003 13:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love it, it's all I can really say. It's different from any other fiction I have had the pleasure of reading beforehand and that makes it something I am looking forward to reading more of.
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Reviewed By: Momma Cat ha! On: December 22, 2003 00:04 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Okay a song came to mind with that last sentence. #1 Crush by garbage. Yes great chapter. I wouldn't think you would be cruel enough to kill Duo's second love... but I wonder? ^_^
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Reviewed By: Autum On: December 16, 2003 11:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story, it's soooo well developed! The characters seem so real, it's almost like I'm in the same room with them. Please update soon! I can't stand the suspense!
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Reviewed By: eien_ni_kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2003 09:31 CST
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This is a good Gundam Wing fic. I never saw the anime before and i'm really starting to like it. Please update soon. Can't wait to see what else happens with Duo and Heero!
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Title: :)
Reviewed By: Tatum On: December 06, 2003 18:01 CST
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have* :-\.... and another thing! I really like how you have Milliardo in David and Duo's past...I've never seen someone with so many ideas for so many different people and have it all come together in the end or in a dramatic epiphany..reeaally nice! :)..i'm gonna have to force all my other friends to read this...whether or not they like yaoi o:-)...
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Title: The Tutor
Reviewed By: Tatum On: December 06, 2003 17:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow...um i don't usually comment on fanfics but your fanfic is an excellent AU. that was pretty cool (forgive, I couldn't think of a better word) how you has Keiko as Heero's cousin and have Duo and Keiko meet up again...your creativity is great and I've never read a fanfic like this before. keep up the good work!(no pressure or anything XD)... I'll sure as heck be back to read the rest of it :)
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Reviewed By: bgal [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2003 19:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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oh my god if you don't finish this i will cry profusly. it's so amazingly awesoem. i love it! it's so tied together and intricate and you must have really planned and considered it.
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Title: Momma lover doesn't sound right somehow...
Reviewed By: bishoonen cat or Momma lover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2003 20:29 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this story is just great! But why aren't there more people writing reviews? I mean 3000+ visits and only sixteen reviews? It just ain't right. I wuv this story! ;)
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Reviewed By: Devil1 On: November 07, 2003 23:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's much more color; very interesting and excellent.
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Title: Ch 15
Reviewed By: mookienh [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2003 01:41 CDT
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This was a perfect point in which to introduce what happened in the past. David's meeting with Duo was there, albeit fleeting, and Milliardo's approach and blunt appraisal of him was great. And now we know where Milliardo heard that line about darkness and light.
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Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2003 00:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I agree with Crescent, this story does need to be a best seller. I think that who ever thought OC's aren't interesting, is wrong. I like not liking Keiko and hoping she get's more then a slap across her face. If your not gonna kill her have Heero mess her up, or Relena and she get into a cat-fight, reooooowww! I love Hikaru and feel bad for her. At the same time I feel bad for Odin for being neglected, but its wrong to cheat! I'm not sure if Yukuzi is good or too 'possessive', but she loves Heero so I'm game! David's side of the story is what is really making things interesting. I mean, Duo getting into fights and the 'naughty' things that happen at night. Wow. I'm really into this.
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Reviewed By: Link Worshiper On: October 13, 2003 09:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor boys! I really hope Duo figures out how friggin' cute he and Heero are, 'cause it's making me into a puddle of goo as we speak! Whoohoo! Keep it up, my friend!
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Title: Ch 15
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2003 02:13 CDT
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WOW. The proverbial shit is really hitting the fan with a vengeance. Milliardo intrigues me greatly, and it was satisfying to see Keiko finally get slapped. This chapter has a lot of different elements. Mystery, suspense, and the underlying sexual tension. The brief glimpse of the past between Odin and Yuki was a nice touch as well.
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Reviewed By: Leemaxyui On: October 07, 2003 12:45 CDT
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Oh it would be soooo cool to have Heero find out that Mill is David. I wonder what Duo will do since he still loves David and all. I think that it will be a good story.
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