| "The Proliferation of the Lotus Flower." Reviews/Comments [ 61 ] |
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Reviewed By: QueenFool [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2008 16:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love, one of the greater fan minds here, people!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: nonny On: August 07, 2005 17:21 CDT
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Okay, I agree with the cast of the story, you call that en ending? Come on! You have got to do something with the rest of the cast! What happened to Jou and Seto etc.?
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Title: WHAT!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: ~Kitten~ On: July 23, 2005 11:41 CDT
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WHY DID YOU END IT! THIS IS SUCH A COOL STORY! YOU BETTER BE PLANING A SEQUAL WHERE YAMI COMES BACK FOR YUGI!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 07:36 CDT
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I didn't think it was bad as long as there is a sequel. I want to see the couple together.
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Reviewed By: Reiky On: July 01, 2005 08:19 CDT
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Like your story. Interesting. I just don't want Yami and Yugi to fall apart at the end :( Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Tenshi of Time [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2004 04:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi Sweet, I can't belive I've finally found you. I've been searching god knows where to find you and by pure coincidence I stumble on you here. I've read all your Yu-Gi-Oh stories (I think) and it was cain's lovely balls that got me hooked on Nightwalker. i love this story...in fact I love all the stories I've read of yours and I can't wait till you update. Till then Bye Tenshi of Time -x-
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Reviewed By: HappyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 00:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I go away for a bit, and come back to not one, but two updates. Better yet, one's a Lemon! Yes, it was high time Yami got his virgin ass, now I can't wait to see the fallout of lying to Yugi. As always, your work is magnificent, everyone truly feels in character. Your attention to detail really shows through, particularly in your reasoning in waiting to heal Yami. But one thing that I've been wondering about is Jou. He's definitely not what he seems. Perhaps we humble readers might get a few more clues? Well, good luck writing your fictions!
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Reviewed By: Shaded Faith [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 16:52 CST
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I... love you so much... it's scary XD Nyaaa - the long awaited lemon where Yami and Yugi gets some nice action XDD!! And better yet, some sadistic vampiric love!! *hails* Kyaaa! Love you muchies, darling! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 15:21 CST
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Short. But the lemon made up for it. “Yami crooned some bullshit reassuring words-“ It'll all get better soon, yeah. I like that for some reason. Stands out for some reason. "Can you do that part again? I wasn't paying attention." Suuure, Yugi, I bet you weren't paying attention a lot, were ya? "…just let me breathe for a little bit, I… that was nice…" Nice. Right. "Only my name-" OMG. So hot. OMG. YES. ^^ Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2004 20:16 CST
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Ahhh, thanks... I needed that lemon! I thought it was well done... Now, what do you have in store for the rest of the crew and the story? I'm curious... please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2004 19:48 CST
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Kawaii... please update again soon, I can't wait to see Yami and Yugi together! LOL Yes, I'm getting straight to the point today... *evil grin*
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 04:55 CST
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Oh my lord. Half tempted to go over there and molest you if it will make you write more. Ya know, if it weren't for the fact that that probably wouldn't help, but I am currently trembling over the OMFGWTFBBQOMGOMGOMG-ness of this. Vampire sex! "But talking was not a good option; it meant he was acknowledging the existence of… well… existence. And if you know existence; it can be very persistent in existing." One of the best lines ever.Please, please, please update soon.
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Title: *Teleports into shoebox to save Sweetdeily, Ninja style. Grabs Sweet’s hand then ports out.*
Reviewed By: HappyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 16:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know you could have saved yourself, but consider it my penance for not being able to review you as often as I'd like. *Golden Dragon ports in to throw up a yami wall around the three.* GD: Don't need them killing you two while you talk. HD: ^^;;; Right! Anyway . . . Glad to see you're still working on this. This chapter was fun, the whole thing about the cure/blessing is interesting. It was funny to see a few more references to your Perenial Beings fics. Love seeing the way Yugi is changing, reacting (and not reacting) to Yami. The stuff between Seto & Jou is cute as always, and the Malik Ryo ending . . . No I don't want to kill you. You're right, that did feel like it just should have stopped there, we really don't need to see the pain and torment Ryo is about to be put through. *Turns to Ryo* Which Is Something You Could Thank Her For! . . . Unless you're a masochist. *Turns to Malik* Besides If She's Dead, How Will She Write Future Lemons? *Notes reaction* GD: Here. *hands over talisman keeping the shield up to Sweets* Break it when you want the wall down. Come hikari, you need to work on your fic and stop bothering the nice writer. HD: ^^;; K. *Both disappear in puff of smoke, Ninja style*
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Reviewed By: Shaded Faith [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2004 22:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Super glomp* Nyaaa! You updated *worships* Luf the chappie, nyow! Gasp! Such a teaser XD *bribes with cookies* Update soon, luv!
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Reviewed By: kharma On: November 19, 2004 11:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just one thing...more YamixYuugi! (also, are you planning on updating today is purple anytime soon? ^_^)
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