| "Resolutions" Reviews/Comments [ 56 ] |
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Reviewed By: Pokoki On: April 28, 2004 06:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mmmmmm...anytime you'd care to trouble yourself into continuing...that'd be great...
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Reviewed By: Tweak Vicious On: April 16, 2004 16:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cruel. That was cruel. If this isn't continued poste haste then...well, there's nothing I can do about it. But I reserve the right to be horribly put off.
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Reviewed By: Kirin Tetsoy On: March 29, 2004 18:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You really need to keep this going. ASAP.
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Reviewed By: Kendricks Alashane [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2004 12:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am going to have to say that first off i am sorry. i happened to be looking for something new to read and saw that you had updated. Im going to begin reading this fic again and again i am sorry! the new work is great. Hope to see more soon. Kendricks
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Reviewed By: Aureus cruorori [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2004 16:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
>:O YOU ARE TEASING US! litte flower. ARG! I love it, i love the plot, the whole not able to remember stuff, every thing. :O! you need to add more.
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Title: Disappointed
Reviewed By: Kendricks Alashane [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2004 19:57 EST
Comment/Review:
You have just lost a reader you never update this fic. I am very disappointed. I realt loved your fanfics. But I don't think you care about this one it's as if you have given up on it. Any way just thought you should know. Outtie! :( Kendricks Alashane
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Reviewed By: therhoda [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2004 15:44 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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I really loved your previous fiction and am so happy to see you continuing it. I would love to write a helpful review but that seems to be beyond my talents. So I will try for encouragement and great gifts of cookies!! *hands over many many yummy cookies* I hope you get fufillment out of this while satisfying my greedy need for more!
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Reviewed By: KaiserDan On: January 21, 2004 22:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok seriously you HAVE to continue this story line.
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Reviewed By: Kendricks Alashane [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2003 23:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You do know that I am dying here right. I need more i cant stand it. I need to know whats going to happen. It's been forever since I have seen a new chapter. Please. Please. Im dying to read more. ~Kendricks Alashane~
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Reviewed By: Kuroneko517 On: November 17, 2003 21:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are the awesomest author! Please keep writing this story, I want to see what happens! As great as the story is, it would be exceptionally awesome if she ended up with Kyou! *hint hint* Great story, keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Kousagi-chan On: October 26, 2003 23:19 EST
Comment/Review:
Ah! Don't stop there! Please continue!!! Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Fenlings On: October 05, 2003 23:34 EDT
Comment/Review:
sooo good. thank you! finally a good canon threesome furuba fic that's updated! make it an equal triad? please? pretty please with kyou on top...or yuki on top, whichever...you're doing an excellent job of balancing out the yukiru and kyoru, and wonderful writing. i cried at the end of beginnings. now there will be much regainings of memory and happy endings so that i can finally end my personal FB canon, as i have no access to the manga and the anime has ended...grrr...want my canon threesome... so *updateupdate* ^^ and get her out of any stupid engagements like Jane Eyre before R finds her. good writing, good characterization, *good* plot and explanation of motivation, it's like really finishing FB finally. why have you no website?
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Reviewed By: Fenlings On: October 05, 2003 23:24 EDT
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oooo! thankyou sooo much for writing this series. i've been waiting so long for the end to furuba b/c the anime doesn't include the ending and i can't get the manga. instant canon threesome gratification in fics...but no one has written like *any* good fics. are people insane? and random fandom's 'discoveries,' my only other goodfic until now, is *never* updated. (what is it with the whole 'they all shack up together in a cabin in the hinterlands' theme in these fics?) so wow. cried at the end of beginnings. please update update and finish and get her out of any stupid engagements like Jane Eyre before R finds her. So this story *must* have a happy ending and much returnings of memory so that i can finally have some kind of end to my internal FB canon. and um, get the boys together too? please? pretty please with yaoi on top? or kyou on top, whichever... *Equal* triad, please? You're already doing a good job with balancing kyoru and yukiru, but kyoki?...I'll love you forever and rec you to *everyone*... Seriously, though, good writing. Keep up the good work. Why have you no website?
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Reviewed By: Moonlights_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2003 17:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniff* I judt finidhed reading Beginnings.
you oughta became an autor, you knoow that?
A real author I mean.
for heavens sakes, Nearley nothing gets me crying,k?
got that?
I cried at the end of you story. yes, cried!!!!!
for, my sake, kamis sake and every one elses sake, I dont even cry with death fics.
you story moved me.
alot.
ano...I have a wish.
could you please, pretty please make a happy ending????
like, you know in the end she remembers, and her friends remeber,
an so-on.
them losing their memory was like at the end of animorphs.
rachel died, and the story didn't even end.
maaaah! argh...
please,please,please!
end this story happy!!!! |
Reviewed By: Tsukitani [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2003 23:45 EDT
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Oooh, so good! Immediatey with the mounting complications. Great! Can't wait for the first chapter, so hurry up, eh? Please?! |
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